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What would I like? I'd like to hold you in my arms untill I fell asleep I'd like to look apon your beauty till desire no longer seeks I'd like to Have you by my side when ever life occures And share with you the moments when we each other served I'd like to Tell you that I love you a thousand different ways And kiss you on the lips if not once, twice a day I'd like to hold your hand in mine any length of time And when you need someone to love you I'd like you to see it in my eyes

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Date: 2/9/2016 11:27:00 AM
Very good poem x Wendy
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:38:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations John on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
John, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:10:00 AM
Hello, John, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:24:00 PM
John, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:39:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, john
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Date: 2/19/2014 6:55:00 PM
now, you were very naughty not checking your spellings, and you've been penalized for it, you just squeaked through to the winners' list! but I can't deny the romantic content, you charmer! congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 2:50:00 PM
An awesome pen my friend!!! Strong emotions expressed here.
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Date: 1/24/2014 3:48:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/24/2014 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful Love Song, John ~ Your Quill Has Evolved Quite Nicely Since Arriving Here Five Years Ago At Her Loving's PoetrySoup ~ Thanks For Stopping By And, Have A Wonderful Day ~ Love John
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John Loving Iii
Date: 1/25/2014 1:10:00 PM
Dear John, on 6-12-14 it will be 7 years.
Date: 1/23/2014 10:52:00 AM
Ahh!! So romantic..Great passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..I am not familar with the hymn that you mentioned but I will look it up on YouTube..Most of the time I can find and hear a song that I remember on there..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2014 10:55:00 AM
I found what I think you are talking about by Eddie Ruth Bradford and another version by Peter, Paul, and May..Sara
Date: 1/22/2014 9:59:00 PM
Yes! Tell it like it is, John! Fantastic!
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Date: 1/22/2014 9:37:00 PM
a very sweet and romantic one, John. Love when you write this way.
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:38:00 PM
A very pretty and romantic write it's full of emotion and caring enjoyed it's light loving feeling tonight thanks for the sharing and thank you for your comment on my fallen angel she is one of my personal favorites. cheri
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:32:00 PM
John, this is so beautifully written. I hope you have in mind a contest for it someday.
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