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What Will Be

A thousand sands in time holding hearts sublime crying their tears again and again watching as they slip away will be will be.... wanting what I can't have and scared to try something new.. please let me just stay here and hide.. you are so full of surprises .. so full of love... its not that simple don't you understand? Life is not what it is life is random musing a happy pen crying the blues no more songs What will be will be Brooke Dyan 2014

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Robert Gruhn

Date: 5/16/2014 7:17:00 PM

Very good read, enjoyed this piece! Robert

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/16/2014 7:26:00 PM

THANK YOU Robert

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/14/2014 5:20:00 AM

Fantastic! Love the ending "A happy pen crying the blues":

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/14/2014 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Monterey...hugs

Sam Toil

Date: 5/11/2014 6:20:00 AM

Dearest Brooke, embrace your life, all of it. No its not simple. But the complexities and challenges are what make life interesting, and are what give us wisdom. Luv & Hugs;) Ben

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/11/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Ben you a re so kind what a owner ful comment.. hugs

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/10/2014 12:30:00 PM

Hi Brooke, Dear friend this was so much emotions and thoughts and you always have that special way where your spirit Speaks and it captures like a painting for us to see. Sad, and I felt sad too. It was beautiful as only your writings can be. Thank you Brooke for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/10/2014 12:34:00 PM

Thank you so much deborah