What Went Wrong

In twilight,
the noose tightens-
and shadows start walking
towards you; to reclaim
your anonymity-
and declare in deadpan manner:
the author is dead.

Your smallness goes
on sale. You are subjected
to scrutiny by the small print, but
the truth escapes from lidless eyes.

A private punishment.
There was blood on the knife.
Why did you write a
sanguinary poem for your savior today ?


Satish Verma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Very intense nice pen versa! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
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December 5, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. ~Joel
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