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What Went Wrong

In twilight, the noose tightens- and shadows start walking towards you; to reclaim your anonymity- and declare in deadpan manner: the author is dead. Your smallness goes on sale. You are subjected to scrutiny by the small print, but the truth escapes from lidless eyes. A private punishment. There was blood on the knife. Why did you write a sanguinary poem for your savior today ? Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/5/2014 7:17:00 AM
Very intense nice pen versa! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:09:00 AM
Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. ~Joel
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