What Was I Thinking

After working for most of forty years,
I’d surely paid my dues.
Retirement brought me time to play
and I need give no excuse.

I’d paid my taxes cheerfully
and tithed for the good Lord.
All my club dues were up to date.
No one could say a word

If I should indulge myself a bit
and live my life with ease.
With children grown and on their own
I had only self to please.

One day a small cat came to call.
I fell for his kittenish ways.
He seemed to be the perfect fit
when I had some lonely days.

What ever was I thinking?
My head must be filled with rocks.
I gave up my freedom, my just dues,
for a cat and his litter box.


For Paula’s contest  “ How Due You Dew”  I won # 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/28/2014 8:46:00 AM
Joyce this is so cute and silly. Now you and the kitty can retire together and do fun things. LOL Thank you for the great comment on my Birthday poem.
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:57:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on another great win for this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:38:00 AM
great poem cousin babe...yes my grey cat brought commitments too litter food to do, an all of that...
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:23:00 PM
Oh Paula, this is such a great poem. I absolutely love it. I have been laughing as I just retired too, and feeling much the same way. Congratulations on such a great win. Lee
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Date: 9/14/2011 10:09:00 AM
ha ha! he snuck right into your life, the little rascal! congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:24:00 AM
joyce, a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your awsome win!!!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/13/2011 2:37:00 PM
Very nice Joyce.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:29:00 AM
We earn the right, after paying dues....but there must be a plan....that kitty was just waiting for you!! :) Cute poem, Joyce!!
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:27:00 AM
LOL but, but..ohhhhhh mine is so cuddley! and so funny! I simply do not feel it is life without a cat! Thanks for the laugh! Congrad's light & love
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:15:00 AM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:35:00 AM
You gave up your freedom for another fun and cute kitty. I'd do the same thing if I were you (the one in this poem), Joyce. hehehe. Congratulations
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/13/2011 3:50:00 AM
hey Joyce congrats on your win, enjoyed..David
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:42:00 PM
Wonderfully funny!! I really enjoyed this Joyce!! Love, Michelle xo
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Date: 9/8/2011 3:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Joyce. Love, Carol
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