Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

What Was His Name

He was tall and cavalier
Wined me under a chandelier
How he was debonair
With his soft blond curls of hair
Gallant and handsome
Dance moves for a twosome
He swept me right off my feet
With a sultry accent straight from Crete
How could I ever forget that starlit sundown
And that bartender from the other side of town



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Caren Krutsinger September 15, 2019 at 8:47 AM A character sketch that told quite the tale, Line. Line Gauthier September 15, 2019 at 11:43 PM Thanks, Caren.

Quoth Theraven September 14, 2019 at 10:46 AM Line, I'm left to wonder about that accent from Crete. I love that. -Richard Line Gauthier September 15, 2019 at 11:43 PM Worth a trip?

Ann Gilmour September 14, 2019 at 1:59 AM Ohh, a touch of the Shirley Valentine's - do you know the film Line? I really enjoyed your poem, a really uplifting write and a joy to read. Good luck in the contest and I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Line Gauthier September 15, 2019 at 11:44 PM Thanks for your lovely visit, Ann. I wish I did know the film.

Geoffrey Brewer September 13, 2019 at 3:30 PM This is a delightful and sophisticated skilled composition, Line. I love it. Line Gauthier September 15, 2019 at 11:45 PM Thank you so much, Geoffrey. Most appreciated.

Brenda Chiri September 13, 2019 at 7:58 AM Great entry for the contest Line! Good luck!;) Line Gauthier September 13, 2019 at 8:46 AM Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire September 13, 2019 at 12:21 AM Great one, nice story. Line Gauthier September 13, 2019 at 6:38 AM LOL Thanks, Timothy.