What Time Succumbs To

Left open new
Towards the blue
Working anew
Showing a few
Becoming wonder
Left to blunder
About the yonder
Golden to ponder
Simple satisfy
She is so fly
I become alive
Though it may die
She succumbs
To the bums
Of life’s hums
Enormous scums
Freedom elicits
Whatever permits
Shortwave complicit
There’s a deficit
Her eyes don’t lie
She doesn’t deny
I want to cry
But cannot scry
Left alone
She bones
Her left scone
Now belongs
To nothing more
Than a shore
Of trinkets galore
Time takes a snore

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Onclaud Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 6:33 PM
russell, you are on a roll with varied forms... what a remarkable piece in the best of rhyming scheme.. time is on your side when it comes to greeeat poetry.. huggs
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 3:23 PM
Wonderful monorhyme, Russell.. it is not the easiest to write.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Goff Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Perfect follow to reading SO's poem...nicely done
One Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Time waits for no man Russell.. Nice rhyme and flow to this..
Lane Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:43 AM
I wish time would take a snore. It's passing by much too quickly. Your monorhyme lines were fun to read, Russell.
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 6:36 AM
A rhythmic depiction of love and romance--your poem flows with emotion Russell!
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