What Time Is It

spring ahead fall back
tick...tock....tick...tock ...  just ticking ...
waiting for Winter 





Gotta Just Love That White Stuff   LOL


Winter Is My Chose For Season Senryu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Katherine. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:37 PM
Nice use of the clock to bring about the thought of winter. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Katherine, I am glad to see this fine senryu made it into the top ten. LUv, Andrea
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June 19, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Spence Sr Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Way to go sis. I like this. I am also waiting for Santa myself. Great job! Broether Joe
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Congrats Katherine on your success in my contest with this cute and unique entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Yes, it is a clever one. It is the season I like least but I know many people love it! I think this deserves a great win! LUv, Andrea
Goff Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:15 PM
very clever! enjoyed! Katherine! and thanks for your kind words! gemini jim
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June 13, 2010 at 2:22 PM
I'm glad we're past winter for awhile. The below zero weather just ain't as fun as when I was a kid building snow houses. I like the middle line of this one. Gives me the feel of urgency with time passing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good week. Karen
Guzzi Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Soup mail still works hon...Your Phrase is READ MY LIPS....hurry now! GO!
La France Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 7:06 AM
I hate that time change thing, always throws me off, but I love winter..well done.. best of luck in the contest.. love constance
Tideswell Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:34 AM
Very original, really enjoyed your senryu. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Nice musical welcome to winter. Mine too is winter
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