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Of course, you know the way to do this thing, without a person’s hands or water wings. Immersed within your heart’s remembering, is the wave in mommy’s tummy as she’d sing. Floating baby from nature's aqueous, swimming like a fish for you is glorious. Future Olympian, you’re marvelous, a wonder to behold for all of us. 3/1/17 # 3 WHAT THE EYE SEES THE HEART CANNOT FORGET !!! Sponsored by: Mystic Rose

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Date: 3/28/2017 3:55:00 AM
Brilliant!! Congrats Janis, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/23/2017 9:26:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Janis!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/24/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thanks and blessings Kim.
Date: 3/23/2017 11:31:00 AM
Janis, congratulations on your win :) Awesome write.... ~*
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Date: 3/23/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Janis
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Date: 3/23/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Date: 3/23/2017 7:57:00 AM
Spot On! CONGRATS XO
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Date: 3/23/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Donna.
Date: 3/1/2017 6:33:00 PM
Hi Janis, hope its ok, I just used this poem for a literature piece for a class of high school kids. we discussed it and they loved it. The class ability is very low, they said to say great writing. cheers.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/1/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thanks Lewis. I sent you some mail.

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