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What Might Have Been

1 i plucked a string; it rang through me like a hook through a fish. i was hooked on the fine craftsmanship; the way the wood was cut. i was convinced that the hollow inside contained a million dreams. if i could only reach them. 2 christmas came in a whorl-wind of crinkling paper and tinsel. i opened one of my presents to find a guitar; it sang to me in secret tones. i knew there and then, we would be friends forever. i had to bring out the best in my six string friend. so i conversed with my six string friend until my fingers burned, i didn’t wish to cool the flame. 3 time changed things as it always does. i grew tired of the harmony we shared. swapped my music books and slipped into other pages of life. now you sit in the corner like a naughty child. i watch you with dreams now fading into the screams of what might have been.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 10:45:00 PM
A lovely piece Jonh. i enjoyed reading, just kip them coming
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Date: 2/11/2011 9:37:00 PM
I had a clarinet, and I felt a very similar way about it all of my life. Your work is very descriptive and fascinating.
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:51:00 PM
WOW! JOHN, I LOVE IT.. I HAD MYSELF A MIGHT HAVE BEEN BUT, THE SAD THING IS ON X- MASS ~ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES~SKAT
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Date: 1/31/2011 3:36:00 AM
A thought provoking write John, would love to know what inspired it? Enjoyed reading it today ;) Wilma
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:35:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on what might have happened, john
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