What Might Have Been

1

i plucked a string;
it rang through me
like a hook through
a fish.

i was hooked on
the fine 
craftsmanship;
the way the wood
was cut.

i was convinced
that the hollow
inside contained
a million dreams.

if i could only 
reach them.


2

christmas came
in a whorl-wind
of crinkling paper
and tinsel.
i opened one
of my presents
to find a guitar;
it sang to me
in secret tones.

i knew there
and then,
we would be
friends forever.

i had to bring out
the best
in my six string
friend.

so i conversed
with my six string 
friend until
my fingers burned,

i didn’t wish to
cool the flame.


3

time changed things
as it always does.

i grew tired of the
harmony we shared.

swapped 
my music books

and slipped into 
other pages of life.

now you sit in the corner
like a naughty child.

i watch you with dreams
now fading

into the screams
of what might have been.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:27 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ditshwele Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:45 PM
A lovely piece Jonh. i enjoyed reading, just kip them coming
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 9:37 PM
I had a clarinet, and I felt a very similar way about it all of my life. Your work is very descriptive and fascinating.
A  Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 9:51 PM
WOW! JOHN, I LOVE IT.. I HAD MYSELF A MIGHT HAVE BEEN BUT, THE SAD THING IS ON X- MASS ~ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES~SKAT
Neels Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 3:36 AM
A thought provoking write John, would love to know what inspired it? Enjoyed reading it today ;) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 5:35 AM
Very creative and interesting write on what might have happened, john
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