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What Makes Me Smile

Smiles from me to you, making you happy not blue. Friendship we can praise, as we enjoy sunny days.
My puppy is tan and small, she likes to sleep in mommy's shawl. She loves to play with her ball, while I play with my doll. We like to play outside, where she will run and hide. I will put her in my doll buggy for a ride, her smile becomes a mile wide. Now is it time to go inside, dinner is ready with chicken that has been fried.
I make funny--did I make you laugh or smile today, Your eyes light up with a big bright smile-no more gray, My day's work is now all done-I am off to play.

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Date: 6/20/2025 6:15:00 PM
Delightful! So much easier to bring joy to the world than sadness. A smile is a good place to start. Very well composed!
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Date: 6/20/2025 2:27:00 PM
Thank you for the smile. Dogs make me smile, too. And cats.
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Date: 6/20/2025 10:36:00 AM
- An adorable poem...happy and light...smiles and joy...best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2025 10:49:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Also thanks for your, best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "What Makes Me Smile" rhyme write to be, An adorable poem. It was fun to bring to life. Hope you also have a lovely weekend with hugs. "Smile" Give a free "Smile" away then go writing away.............
Date: 6/20/2025 10:34:00 AM
Dear Paula your lovely poem has made me smile, somehow your poetry always brings a smile. Keep writing in your own unique style, it’s so worthwhile to make folk feel happy and cause them to smile… Beryl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2025 10:46:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Also thanks for your, very kind words. You have made me day a happy one. Glad you found my fun "What Makes Me Smile" rhyme write to be a, lovely poem. It was fun to bring to life. "Smile" Give a free "Smile" away then go writing away.............
Date: 6/20/2025 10:18:00 AM
you've beautiful such an uplifting poem and crafted a rhythmic rhyme scheme. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, YR
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2025 10:42:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Makes Me Smile" rhyme write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes with the contest. It was fun to write. "Smile" Give a free "Smile" away then go writing away.............
Date: 6/20/2025 10:14:00 AM
What Makes Me Smile ~ Date Written:6/20/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.....
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