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What Makes Me Happy

What makes me happy? There are many long lists: I don’t want IV tubes attached to my wrists. I also don’t need any malignant cysts. If drugs can keep my hypertension at bay, I hopefully can live to see another day. When the ambulance comes to take me away, I hope there won’t be any traffic tie-ups that day. I receive far less than I ever give. Despite my problems, I want to continue to live. What makes me happiest of all you say? When I wake up each morning to face another day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/20/2011 12:57:00 PM
Cool rhymes, Robert. Congrats on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/20/2011 1:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love it x
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Date: 12/19/2011 9:19:00 PM
Each day is a gift! Congrats on your win, Robert. Merry Christmas! Kim
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:14:00 PM
Great writing Robert. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/19/2011 3:58:00 PM
Sounds like you are having some health concerns,Robert. It's starting with me too. Sometimes I get to where i feel happy just getting thru the day with my back not bothering me! Good poem. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2011 10:02:00 PM
No Andrea. It hasn't gotten that bad with me yet. The power of a good write can give a reader that type of picture.
Date: 12/19/2011 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Robert. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/11/2011 6:33:00 PM
well said! i like the ending very much.
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