What Makes Me Happy

What makes me happy?  There are many long lists:
I don’t want IV tubes attached to my wrists.
I also don’t need any malignant cysts.
If drugs can keep my hypertension at bay,
I hopefully can live to see another day.
When the ambulance comes to take me away,
I hope there won’t be any traffic tie-ups that day.
I receive far less than I ever give.
Despite my problems, I want to continue to live.
What makes me happiest of all you say?
When I wake up each morning to face another day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Cool rhymes, Robert. Congrats on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love it x
Merryman Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Each day is a gift! Congrats on your win, Robert. Merry Christmas! Kim
Johnson Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 8:14 PM
Great writing Robert. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Sounds like you are having some health concerns,Robert. It's starting with me too. Sometimes I get to where i feel happy just getting thru the day with my back not bothering me! Good poem. Congrats in the contest.
Pettit Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 10:02 PM
No Andrea. It hasn't gotten that bad with me yet. The power of a good write can give a reader that type of picture.
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Robert. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol
Bauer Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 6:33 PM
well said! i like the ending very much.
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