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What Makes Me Happy

My happiness, lies, in my merriment! My happiness, lies, in my commitment! I'm happy, when in good health; i'm not lacking! I'm happy, when in contest; i'm not losing! Always happy, to see the green field ever grow! Always happy, to see the blue stream ever flow! I get happy, when people see me, as not a foe! I get happy, when i'm embraced from head to toe! As happiness treasure! Comes from one's pleasure! I reduce my work pressure! By writing at my leisure! Always happy, that most times; i'm always busy! Always happy, that; i'm not known to be lazy! I'm also happy, when my dad, is in his smiling mood! I'm also happy, when my mum, is serving the food! I'm happy, that my parents, are proud of me! I'm happy, that you all, also loves me! For the Carol brown, being happy's contest.

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/3/2012 7:08:00 AM

Nice poem Aelaja....Lots of excellent reason for happiness here, reading your poem makes me happy :) - Shaz

John Freeman

Date: 12/20/2011 12:40:00 PM

Cool Job, Aelaja. Congrats on a worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2011 1:32:00 AM

Really enjoyed this Congratulations on your win x

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/19/2011 9:02:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem, Adelaja. It made me smile. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Congrats on your win. Kim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/19/2011 7:06:00 PM

A good child makes jhappy parents. Love your poem and congratulations on your high placement. Love, joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2011 3:46:00 PM

what a cute poem. My favorite part, dad in good mood and mom serving the food. Sure to make any child happy when at home with parents. Congrats!

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/20/2011 2:57:00 PM

lovely you! thanks for lovely comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2011 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Adelaja. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/19/2011 3:21:00 PM

WITH GREAT GRATITUTES, IT WELL APPRECIATED. WARM REGARDS TO YOUR FAMILY. LOVE, ADELAJA.

Aleksandra Ivanova

Date: 12/12/2011 11:52:00 PM

this made me smile and made me happy :) good luck with the contest :D

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/13/2011 12:33:00 PM

thanks

John Aaron Green

Date: 12/10/2011 10:11:00 PM

very nice creative write,,,i can relate to being happy,,,thanks for sharing with me....

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/19/2011 3:23:00 PM

ITS MY PLEASURE! YOU GUYS ARE GREAT!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/10/2011 6:14:00 PM

Simple to read and understand while being decently descriptive. Good write.

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/19/2011 3:27:00 PM

THANKSSSSSS!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/10/2011 5:14:00 PM

Yes, you're a guy I can love Adelaja, you make it sound so easy and I think is is naturally a bug part of you!

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/19/2011 3:29:00 PM

well appreciated!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2011 4:15:00 PM

Great things in your life bring you happiness..Good to know a very outgoing young man..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking the time to comment on my work..It was very uplifting..Sara

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/10/2011 4:49:00 PM

thanks for the good comment

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/10/2011 1:38:00 PM

Really enjoyed your approach to the contest ;) Good luck with your entry ;)

Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/10/2011 4:50:00 PM

thanks so well