What Made Her Unworthy

what made her unworthy of love
was it because she couldn't live up to your ideal
that she lost her appeal?

You lived for the surreal
now too numb to feel

Tell me, what was the deal?

what made her fall from grace
was it sun spots on her face
her flannel instead of lace
her slower than youthful pace?

Was that why she lost
her pedestaled place?

Do you look at her and see

something other than beauty?

Is she flabby instead of firm

militant instead of meek

the lurid side of lovely

tell me!
what could it be?

when did she go
from pleasure treasure
to discarded at leisure

What was the measure
of your detestable displeasure?

let's me be clear:

"love is in the eye of the beholder"

Here's a tap on your shoulder
instead of a fist in your face
I won't add to the disgrace
yet your problem prevails
it's in the details:

you're beholder beholden
to your own foolish fantasy
of what your woman should be
what you can't see
is just what makes others all agree:

SHE'S A Bountiful BEAUTY!

Her body and soul
every part of the whole
exquisitely enhanced
by the years and by chance

she deserves desire's delirious dotage
not apathetic apathy
Can't you see?

maybe....
maybe you are the one
not deserving to decree
her worth, her esteem

she's gone now
go dream
scream
try to serve up a scheme
to love her up to extreme

She won't fall again!
that is true!

You see, dear
The problem, the problem
is
YOU!

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/18/2017 4:55:00 AM
Eileen, Well done, well read, well said! I love the support you provide for women! Brava! : )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/18/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, dear. Your visit is an honor. Hugs, dear.
Date: 6/17/2017 7:46:00 AM
Wowzer! This is impactful. As always your words amplify and resonate! Good to have you back writing. With work and the house I haven't been around much lately. Understandably I don't have many visiting any more.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/18/2017 2:48:00 PM
I'll always visit, Richard. I know you've been very busy...I have too. Still...I've missed writing SO much! Thanks for the kind words. Hugs
Date: 6/13/2017 9:04:00 AM
Beauty should not be just a thin outer layer that panders to superficiality. There is a lot more to it than that, and you sum it all up perfectly in this heartfelt poem, Eileen. ~ Hope all is well...hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/18/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. You understand me well. For that I am grateful. I wish more people could see the beauty within. Hugs
Date: 6/8/2017 2:39:00 PM
- A heartbreaking poem - with power and truth, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/18/2017 3:11:00 PM
Life is not free of heartache, dear, but we carry on! Hugs to you
Date: 6/6/2017 5:49:00 PM
I agree with your poem, my thought was and is " if my love can't hold you, no ones can " because it's not love you need
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/18/2017 3:11:00 PM
Your comments are insightful, Frederic. I look forward to your visits.
Date: 6/6/2017 5:44:00 PM
Blinded by beauty, Eileen. Bravo!!
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:23:00 PM
Eileen Eileen, you took my breathe away with this soul true heartfelt piece. I, myself can relate to this. I used think I wasn't worthy but I know better now, at least I think. Lol! Such beautiful you penned girl. And by the way I love your Avatar(picture) very beautiful :) A fave
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Date: 6/6/2017 2:34:00 PM
oh so powerfully penned Eileen! There is so much pressure on women to be the perfect woman and many fall short of this and it can put stress on a relationship . :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:48:00 PM
Wonderful pen Eileen! xomo
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:46:00 PM
Oh, Eileen!!! I love this write! In such a superficial world this is so poignant in its truth! Great stuff
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