Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

What Little Girls Are Made Of

What Little Girls are Made of

When did you learn
you’re not good enough?
Was it when you were a girl
trying to figure out stuff?

All you wanted to be
was daddy’s little girl
Tea cup party pretty 
a princess with curls

“Sugar and spice, everything nice”
but that’s not what you were made of
Fiery adventurous, a wonder born of thunder
Searching empty eyes to find his love


If only he could have seen
How your hopeful heart had pleaded
A world of “Sunshine and rainbows”
Was all that you needed

Your life didn’t consist of
“Tea parties, laces and baby doll faces”
Some might tell you you’re searching
for love in the wrong places

But the need you feel
 is beyond the unspoken
What happened back then
Has left you feeling broken

So see through different eyes 
a princess a queen
A girl kind and generous
who wants to be seen

You have beauty and strength 
“That’s what little girls are made of”
When you find belief in yourself
you’ll be a step away from true love!



Dedicated to a friend, who I hope will discover her amazing.
For me I did not learn to love myself until I felt the love of my 
Heavenly Father. It seems my earthly one wasn’t up for the task.


Note: lines in quotes are from the poem “Sugar and Spice” author: unknown

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Eileen Manassian June 1, 2020 at 11:25 AM Beautiful. The search for love will either redeem us or destroy us. I'm discouraged. Thought I'd get back into the swing of things here. I was told I had no summer courses to teach and just today I got an email asking me to teach. I'm rushing trying to prepare. Hugs Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2020 at 6:24 PM Sorry you are discouraged. I have not been inspired much myself. Enjoy your teaching. Hugs Rick.

Juliet Ligon September 20, 2019 at 9:53 AM This is sweet. Richard Lamoureux September 20, 2019 at 12:08 PM Thanks Juliet.

Charles Messina July 22, 2018 at 10:10 PM Richard, this is great...I don't know how I missed this one...A fav...Love this! Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2018 at 10:29 PM Thanks Charles, much appreciated.

Vladislav Raven July 4, 2018 at 8:04 AM Hi Richard, this is such a wonderful write for your friend. Your words are touching and true. This write touches so deep Richard. I love the content. One day i will also learn that i am worth something in this world. I took much in from your write my friend. You see, we are never too young to learn. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike. Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2018 at 10:30 PM Sorry I missed this comment Mike. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

Brandy Nicole June 29, 2018 at 1:54 PM Such a beautiful dedication to your friend. Little girls are made of sugar and spice, with tender hearts. However, strength and wisdom linger deep within as well. Your thoughts touch me deeply. ~ Brandy

Faraz Ajmal June 20, 2018 at 9:02 AM Ahh, such a beautiful message is there in this wonderful poem of yours, everyone should read and learn from it, you have given a great ribute to your friend and I am sure that after reading it, she ll definitely feel better, good luck and have a nice day

Paul Callus June 7, 2018 at 7:47 AM Some people grow and learn the hard way, but they get there eventually, and they will be stronger for it. Love your poem, Richard; it shows that encouragement goes a long way. Regards // paul Richard Lamoureux June 7, 2018 at 7:52 AM Thanks Paul, each person has the power to buil up or knock down. Thanks for your kind words.

Maria Williams June 6, 2018 at 6:44 AM A sweet write for your friend Richard. I do hope she gains strength from it. Young people have it so tough nowadays, and low self esteem certainly does not help. I am so sorry to hear about your own experience. It certainly made you the strong man you are today.....Maria hugs Richard Lamoureux June 6, 2018 at 8:38 AM Thanks Maria, I have no regrets. With life’s challenges we are provided valuable gifts. Thanks for your thoughtful words.

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2018 at 2:38 PM Richard, I hope you have shown this poem to the lady who doesn't acknowledge her own self worth. It is sad when children have to struggle for love from their fathers. Your poem is uplifting when you speak of seeing "through different eyes." Perhaps she will grow more confidant when she reads your words. A wonderful poem, Richard! Love, Carolyn Richard Lamoureux June 6, 2018 at 8:41 AM Thanks so much Carolyn. Yes I did share it with her prior to posting. Each person grows in their own way and she is a strong in her way.

Harry Horsman June 4, 2018 at 5:08 PM Richard reading your poetry, is an education, i've been there so many times.. Richard Lamoureux June 5, 2018 at 8:07 AM Thanks Harry.

Susan Ashley June 2, 2018 at 10:11 PM Richard, your beautiful and poetic heart and soul, extends with generousity, an encouraging guiding light to another's heart and soul in need. Your poem is powerfully yet lovingly spoken. The depth and warmth of your empathy is deep and abundant. Warmest wishes my wonderful friend. ~Susan Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2018 at 8:13 AM You are kind, thanks Susan.

Janice Canerdy June 2, 2018 at 9:39 AM WOW! I LOVE this--made me smile and tear up at the same time, Richard! Janice Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2018 at 8:15 AM I’m glad it elicits that response from you, thanks Janice.

Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2018 at 9:05 PM Very nice, Richard! Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2018 at 8:34 AM Thanks Kim.

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2018 at 1:39 AM So well said Richard, strength comes from many sources, and encouraging those who need to discover it is it always good! Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2018 at 7:42 AM Thanks Arthur.;0)

Chris Hagy May 31, 2018 at 10:02 PM Inspiring words for your friend :)...being a tomboy all my life, I especially like the last verse. My father died when I was 3, so God My Father is the only father I've had...and he is the Best Father! :) Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2018 at 7:45 AM He is indeed. Girls who were Tom Boys often become strong amazing, independent women. I expect that has been the case with you. Thanks for such a great comment.

Poet Tacito May 31, 2018 at 3:15 PM Beautifully touching & vital to the reassurance we *all* need. Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2018 at 7:43 PM Thanks Drake. So nice to have you visit. I hope all is well with you.

Winged Warrior May 31, 2018 at 9:43 AM Beautifull heartfelt verse my friend...love and family is all we need...love, family and light...^WW^ Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thanks ^WW^!

Demetrios Trifiatis May 31, 2018 at 7:36 AM Experience with better understanding brigs forth valuable advise well expressed dear friend, Richard! Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2018 at 7:50 AM Thanks Demetrios.

Mystic Rose Rose May 30, 2018 at 9:17 PM Only when we find true love can we understand ourselves and our place in the Universe . A church sign today read " we can give without love but we can't love without giving " This is such a truism. I am glad you found your Father-hero. Thank you for sharing Richard Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2018 at 7:52 AM Thanks Pixie, I like and believe the words you shared. So nice to have you drop by.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 30, 2018 at 6:36 PM A beautiful mind, a heart of a poet looking inward human souls! A gracious flow of words and message! You are stretching a generous and an acknowledging hand to an amazing soul. A wonderful write. A joy to read. Stay blessed. Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 7:14 PM Thanks for your visit and thoughtful comment.

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2018 at 6:09 PM This is really good poetry. To write this for a friend who really needs to know this about herself. I did not have a father in the way lots of girls do, yet I hear this is quite the norm these days, to have an absent father figure. However, thanks to my mom and others in my life, I grew up confident and happy. I'm glad you found love for yourself. You deserve to. Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 7:15 PM Thanks Andrea, it only takes one person to set you on the road to a confident future.

Elaine George May 30, 2018 at 4:39 PM Great message in this poem, Richard. Yes! Girls in my generation where expected to live their lives for someone else...how things have changed. Great writing. Elaine Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 4:57 PM Thanks Elaine, it is good that some things have changed.

Ralph Sergi May 30, 2018 at 1:56 PM Beautiful and touching poem, Richard. I can relate as I have 3 daughters. Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 3:41 PM I’m sure you are a great dad Ralph. Thanks for the visit.

Eileen Manassian May 30, 2018 at 10:08 AM Very touching poem, Richard. Deep...your insight into human psyche has always amazed me. Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 11:04 AM Thanks and a big hug Eileen. ;0)

Alexis Y. May 30, 2018 at 9:22 AM WoW! Richard, This is such a powerful and heartfelt verse. I for one can relate to most of your lines. It can be hard to accept and embrace love when you've never experienced it. I agree, one must find that authentic love within, although that alone may be a hard task. Excellent job and straight in to my favs:-) Alexis Richard Lamoureux May 30, 2018 at 9:37 AM I just love this response, thoughtful and sensitive. I think many people are searching outside for what can only be discovered within.

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