What Life Means To Me

Life,
I put the suit on long ago
been wearing it ever since
it came with a coat and snappy vest
and two pair of shiny pants.

The pockets I filled with important things
crickets, frogs, and ants
all of them on the list that read
do’s and don’ts and can’ts.

The suit of life, it changed with me
into a statement of the times
tattered jeans and tie-dyed shirts
adorning screaming mimes.

Shifted gently through love’s tears
it’s births and deaths and sorrows
tailored itself to changing needs
as todays became tomorrows

Fashion may affect the tone
yet the fabric of the cloth retains
the honor of the tailor’s hand
the piety of living’s stains.

The jacket hangs, as jackets must
over pants with ageless sheen
the pockets bulge with life’s reward
the visions of its dream.

I put the suit on long ago
and wore it till it fit
now hold it ever precious – dear
I’ve grown quite fond of it.



2/8/2015
submitted to – What Life Means To Me – Poetry contest
sponsor – Jerry T Curtis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ebbs Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:17 PM
I like it John, congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Brilliantly put up John! Great take n so is the win! Big congrats!
Trichet Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 3:09 AM
Excellent JL, metaphorical brilliance, so many lines of wonderment. A fave for me too. Congrats on a superb win.
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 6:31 PM
This is an amazing poem with the metaphor of the jacket representing life. Well expressed and worthy of a win!
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