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What Is What

Compressed carbon is called Diamond Cut land in water is called Island Beaten copper is Wire Love bitten man- Lover Compressed, cut n’ beaten man is Husband

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2021 1:52:00 AM

Love the last line!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/4/2021 7:33:00 PM

And on his knees begging for mercy... lol... Tell it like it is, Valsa! ~ From the Doghouse in the backyard

Silpika Kalita

Date: 12/4/2021 6:47:00 PM

As amazing as always, love those lines.. Hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 12/4/2021 2:46:00 PM

Too funny and clever Vasa. This is my giggle for the day. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/4/2021 11:54:00 AM

Sounds like you are ready to wipe the floor with him! Merry Christmas!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2021 11:36:00 AM

hahaha. GREAT ending and putting it all together.

Anil Deo

Date: 12/4/2021 9:09:00 AM

This is brilliantly funny. So glad we can share humor as poets, too. shalom shalom Valsa.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/4/2021 7:02:00 AM

Touch of intellect in every line my friend. Kudos for your thoughts.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/4/2021 2:11:00 AM

That's a funny ending Valsa. Give us more. :)