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What Is What

Compressed carbon is called Diamond
Cut land in water is called Island
Beaten copper is Wire
Love bitten man- Lover
Compressed, cut n’ beaten man is Husband

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2021

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December 1, 2024 at 2:51 AM

Whoa!! Sad that compressed, cut n' beaten is used to describe husband. They are so much more or at least I think so. Thanks for sharing this one. I guess if looked at it with humor it can be used to describe a husband. Sara K

Caren Krutsinger

December 5, 2021 at 1:52 AM

Love the last line!

December 4, 2021 at 7:33 PM

And on his knees begging for mercy... lol... Tell it like it is, Valsa! ~ From the Doghouse in the backyard

December 4, 2021 at 6:47 PM

As amazing as always, love those lines.. Hugs

December 4, 2021 at 2:46 PM

Too funny and clever Vasa. This is my giggle for the day. Loved it. God Bless, JB

December 4, 2021 at 11:54 AM

Sounds like you are ready to wipe the floor with him! Merry Christmas!

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2021 at 11:36 AM

hahaha. GREAT ending and putting it all together.

December 4, 2021 at 9:09 AM

This is brilliantly funny. So glad we can share humor as poets, too. shalom shalom Valsa.

December 4, 2021 at 7:02 AM

Touch of intellect in every line my friend. Kudos for your thoughts.

Victor Buhagiar

December 4, 2021 at 2:11 AM

That's a funny ending Valsa. Give us more. :)

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