What Is What

Compressed carbon is called Diamond
Cut land in water is called Island
Beaten copper is Wire
Love bitten man- Lover
Compressed, cut n’ beaten man is Husband
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 12/1/2024 2:51:00 AM
Whoa!! Sad that compressed, cut n' beaten is used to describe husband. They are so much more or at least I think so. Thanks for sharing this one. I guess if looked at it with humor it can be used to describe a husband. Sara K
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Date: 12/5/2021 1:52:00 AM
Love the last line!
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Date: 12/4/2021 7:33:00 PM
And on his knees begging for mercy... lol... Tell it like it is, Valsa! ~ From the Doghouse in the backyard
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Date: 12/4/2021 6:47:00 PM
As amazing as always, love those lines.. Hugs
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Date: 12/4/2021 2:46:00 PM
Too funny and clever Vasa. This is my giggle for the day. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/4/2021 11:54:00 AM
Sounds like you are ready to wipe the floor with him! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/4/2021 11:36:00 AM
hahaha. GREAT ending and putting it all together.
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Date: 12/4/2021 9:09:00 AM
This is brilliantly funny. So glad we can share humor as poets, too. shalom shalom Valsa.
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Date: 12/4/2021 7:02:00 AM
Touch of intellect in every line my friend. Kudos for your thoughts.
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Date: 12/4/2021 2:11:00 AM
That's a funny ending Valsa. Give us more. :)
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