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the world lulled into a waltz tis blurry who talks the talk hopscotch scrawls who walks the walk future visions blow hot and cold life with no purpose gets mighty old seems high five awes don’t erase the flaws lessons with no plot get no applause lackluster society doesn’t connect the dots this dilly-dally world tarnishes the bot gumption and prudence still adrift mankind’s journey a repetitive tiff repeat after me, life’s still a gift

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Date: 12/20/2023 8:03:00 PM
Hi Franci. I am taken with the last line. You are so right. ZIM
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 12/21/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, ZIM.
Date: 12/4/2023 11:15:00 PM
beautiful write indeed life's a gift enjoying reading your poem
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 12/5/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Yolanda. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/28/2023 1:03:00 PM
Great poem Franci..
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 11/29/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/11/2023 10:01:00 AM
A thoughtfully written poem with a good ending. Thank you.
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 11/11/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Hilda.

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