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What Is Love? (1973)

OH NAKED MAN IN HARMONIA TELL ME WHAT IS LOVE Love is when a sensitive child Happens on a flowering hillside and Cries out with joy In the blazing eyes of a cat The eyes only Be it live Or photograph Love’s power is That it has no secrets Will allow none Love will settle on a countenance And strip it bare For all the world to see An old old man Given up struggle Given up thought Helpless before his maker Love has no earthly intelligence But chooses fool Or Saint alike Some say love is complexity But I say that love is simplicity And draws its power From contrast with complex things So simple love That it brings tears Of disbelief If love is fine Where love is serf Just think how great Where love is king On this side they call it love What needs no name In its kingdom Love is not a God It is a helpless thing Without a power to persuade Love needs no thought. Those who think they love Do not love at all Think of every worldly set of situations Thought about and then Declare that love is none of these None of these are love

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Date: 12/17/2015 4:00:00 PM
DAver, I always wondered about this one and why 1973? I chose it to see again because that was my graduation date from high school!! what was its importance for YOU?
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Daver Austin
Date: 12/20/2015 12:25:00 PM
I can't remember why I wrote this one, just something to write about I suspect. Hey! I graduated from high school in 1947. Boy, am I old! Love, daver
Date: 3/10/2010 5:17:00 PM
Sorry for my typo in your comment I ment WORDS...In your last comment...I see you have alot of soup readers who like your poems as well. I agree with all comment u have on this poem . It does have alittle bit of everything. Enjoyed reading....
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:54:00 AM
Beautifully expressed with wisdom of life,,so many think about love,,very few ever truly find it,,,in my opinion it cannot be forced or coordinated it just is....Thank you for reading and leaving your comment upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 1/26/2010 9:54:00 AM
Its a beautiful Poem throwing new light on Love's some aspects, but 'Love is not a God It is a helpless thing Without a power to persuade' is partly true and partly not. May be it is my way of looking but the poem is very nicely penned. Thanks with best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:42:00 PM
What wonderful words Daver and would be a great entry for Matt's new contest but he does not allow the word love to be used in the poem though the contest is called I Love You Because... maybe u could substitute the word in your poem for another word, as I did with my entry Cozy Confections, and enter it .. this would be a winner for sure... thankxxx for your nice comments tonight ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/16/2010 3:07:00 PM
This one has lots of things in it to think about, Dave! It is very good writing, and this was my favorite part: Love’s power is That it has no secrets Will allow none (when it's unconditional, any thought should be one that is not met with condemnation) Luv (notice I never say "love") Andea
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:54:00 PM
DAve, I have sent you the correct email via the internet. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:28:00 AM
Deep, thought-provoking write, Daver! Goes to my favs.! I especially like "...love's power is that it has no secrets will allow none..." Great write! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:10:00 AM
Daver thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 1/13/2010 6:16:00 AM
God is "LOVE",...we can not compare to this,...yet, we are instructed to love one another,..and this fine write mine friend is helping me understand much more clearly this command. Great poem Sir !!!!!! james
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:11:00 AM
It just is! You blew me away with this one, Dave. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:09:00 PM
Good ideas on expressing your ideas about what love really is. Keep the creative writes flowing. Sara Thanks for the comments on my work.
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:55:00 PM
Awesome perspective on love from your younger days, Daver. I love the line about love needing no thought. Feelings are driven by emotions not the brain -- sometimes that is unfortunate. And I may be the only reader who can relate to the concept of "Harmonia," but I absolutely love this poem! Great work, my friend. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:34:00 PM
some of your stanzas are epic, others drivel. the poem was enjoyable, and compelling you oughta change first lines, though. are you refering to some guru on some fictional hill, or what? those lines make it difficult to get into the poem till the rest of the poem takes over your mood. gurus on hills don't know what love is or they'd be with loved ones, or tell you about God. no other options, in my humble opinion. thanks for a good read,fellow gentlepoet.
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Date: 1/12/2010 1:11:00 PM
So much depth with an interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. You certainly have mastered the power of words in this poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:02:00 PM
Oh my......this line....."love is a helpless thing....without a power to persuade......oh my....that it simply stunning, insightful and so, so, true....
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Date: 1/12/2010 11:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Daver. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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