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The marble block before me Chipped away enough to look busy Stood proudly Dust and marble flaked Hammer and chisel in hand As passersby asked: “what is it” I told them: ” it is a thought Lost in the illusion Of an artists desire To conquer Perfection” //what would you have told them//

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Date: 5/27/2024 6:04:00 AM
Marble is marvelous on its own, yes? Now it's chipped! J :)
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:24:00 PM
Ha, ha. I couldn't do better than you. Probably would have turned the question on passersby. E.g., "What do YOU think it is, Ma'am?" ~ B'S-er from Way Back
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Date: 5/26/2024 7:23:00 PM
Statues of marble are wonderful. Perfection is in the eye of the beholder. Much like poems. Thank you for the inspiration I felt in your poem.
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Date: 5/26/2024 4:29:00 PM
wow...how magnificent this poem. Your captured the artistic spirit quite well. They say creative types are haunted by their own need for perfection. Will have to think on that. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:18:00 AM
This is why art is so abstract.... I would not have been there to be honest lol
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