What Is Hell

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our morbid desire real cause why we suffer ~ Frankenstein takes birth deluded beliefs nurtured by our lower mind ~ manifests demons let us introduce ruler of the netherworld ~ goat head Baphomet piquant dilemma we create these fiendish forms ~ then bow down to them life’s a lucid dream we’re both dreamer and the dreamed ~ who then shall we blame there’s no one else here all that is, is light of Self ~ fear creates our hells 26-March-2023 ____________ Hell Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

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Miguel Nakano

Date: 3/28/2023 3:09:00 PM

Beautifully done, congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2023 4:15:00 AM

Thank you, Miguel

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/28/2023 6:19:00 AM

Yes. fear creates Hell. Congrats to win. Blessings

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2023 4:15:00 AM

Thank you dear Anisha

Valsa George

Date: 3/27/2023 9:44:00 PM

Fear and uncontrolled desires create hell in us . Hell, I feel, is nothing outside, but within. Great Thoughts Seeker Friend. Congratulations on your great win !

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/27/2023 10:01:00 PM

Indeed, we are living light. All manifestations are but thought, fear included. Happy these words resonate, dear Valsa