What If the Journey Ends Before It's Over

What if the journey ends before it’s over
a lessening of purpose with each stride
slowing as the burdens slowly shift
fading in the distance growing close.

When will the trails no longer beckon
soft dusty boots remain beside the door
old hats hang limply in the shadows
inertly beckoning an old man’s gait.

What is the treason of this aging
this slow erosion of a once proud state
perhaps it bids me slowly to acceptance
that every season has its resting place.

Wisdom, you have been a long sought quarry,
a slippery elm impossible to climb
as if the troubled trails that I have traveled
were more about your quest than mine.

Come, rest with me upon a fleeting moment
tell me of your journey’s lessons taught
and I will in comparison inform you
of what I think life is, and what it’s not.

John G. Lawless
©1/27/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/28/2022 12:01:00 PM
A very profound poem! "What is the treason of this aging" ... when the body is betrayed but wisdom prevails! You have given us much to think about. :) Paulette
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Date: 1/28/2022 10:23:00 AM
yes, the best poem I read today, congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2022 9:48:00 AM
John this is the most beautiful thought provoking poem. I absolutely love this one. Beautifully written. Debx
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