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Author Dana Redricks February 4, 2019 What if was your last day and you had to say goodbye Would be ready to meet your maker on your bye and by As you cross the Jordan to the shore The life we live is nothing more than a vapor compared to our eternity Will you be headed towards the promise land where streets are paved with gold or choose the other place where you will tormented and night Will you turn a deaf ear to God's soft whisper an offer of eternal Life is only a whisper here today and gone tomorrow Time is something we do not have to waste; when it's gone it's gone Time is something w noe cannot borrow What has been given by God is what we have Seek the Lord while you can for tomorrow might be too late

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Date: 3/10/2019 1:18:00 PM
Hello Dana Redricks, well said. I also wish to go. It is up to the others to decide. Have a nice day my friend. So nice to meet you.
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Date: 2/12/2019 1:15:00 PM
I don't know how people choose "otherwise!" The wonderful bye and by, I wish to go. I will cry at those who fall and smile at those who go...into sweet eternity!
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:06:00 PM
This is so beautiful and tender. Words from the heart. Congratulations Dana, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Dana. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:30:00 PM
Congrats on poem of the day, Dana.
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on having your lovely verse honored with POTD Dana! : )
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Date: 2/6/2019 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations! You've put us on our toes!
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Date: 2/6/2019 8:34:00 AM
Dana, good advice, congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:50:00 AM
Lovely verse my friend...Congrats!!! on POTD!! Dana...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:41:00 AM
Excellent and well written, Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Dana...
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Dana, have a great day! xomo
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Date: 2/6/2019 5:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Dana :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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