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What if,
my sister Suzanne had not died on that snowy winter day
it was so pretty with the snow falling down and the icicles on trees
I stood holding my mother's hand waiting for Suzanne
we saw her slip on the ice-  we saw the big truck coming
and then mother was screaming and screaming
I will never forget that scream, I still hear it in my dreams
what if Suzanne had not died that day . . .

What if,
my baby boy had lived to see the azure sky and not died
I would have loved him so much and watched him grow up strong
let him make his mistakes but been there to kiss the hurts
watched him grow and become a wonderful young man
but I suppose God had a plan for him and for me
I often go to the place where we buried our little boy
no amount of years can take away the pain . . .

What if,
my husband had not crashed his car into a snowy ravine
he was driving too fast but that was his thing and made me angry
it was a snow storm and again snow was falling so pretty
the road was icy and then he was gone from my life
I dream of him always- his handsome face is smiling at me
we had a love that even death cannot break- it is forever
until we meet again my love . . . 

What if,
grandma was not gone, I can still hear her saying-  write it
write what's in your heart and thus a poet was born
and father, oh how I miss him- he taught me about life
about protecting nature and the animals within our world
and mother, oh mother, she was my rock and my anchor
the most important person in my life, I could tell her everything
and now I float and drift like a cloud in the sky . . .

                                 What if grandpa was still here
                                                                    What if . . . 


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October 11, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/What If
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1070-633-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, New Free Verse
sponsor, Lu Loo

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/10/2019 7:43:00 AM
Excellent write, Constance. This was awesome! congratulations on your win dear friend. So well deserved. Charlie
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Date: 1/10/2019 9:02:00 AM
Charlie, thank you for visiting my poem with that nice comment and the congratulations, appreciate.
Date: 11/6/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Brenda, Nina, Line, Janine, LJ, and Gregory and a big thank you to Laura for the contest and my placement, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/5/2018 12:15:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Constance - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend - this is so powerful! :-) <3
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Date: 10/29/2018 9:08:00 AM
I was going to say congrats on your win but a contest seems petty in light of the deep pain and incredible courage--and faith this poem embodies. You are right-- you will meet again all your beloved, and this life will be revealed as just a dream....
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Date: 10/28/2018 5:15:00 PM
Absolutely heart wrenching and so beautiful - thank you so much for sharing xxx
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Date: 10/28/2018 3:57:00 PM
How much can one heart take!? Well penned, Constance. Congrats on a most deserving gold medal win.
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Date: 10/28/2018 11:40:00 AM
you always know how to touch me deeply sweet Dear Heart..beautifully sad as always. Hugs...Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Heidi and Victor for visiting my poem and for your kind words ~
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:50:00 PM
So much loss, so very unfair and painful beyond words. I can relate to numerous losses that stay vivid throughout life. Writing is your passion and you do it well with great expression. :)
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