What I Wish You Knew

Sitting silently here
and listening to you
thinking to myself
what I wish you knew
of how different your life
could actually be
if you would only
listen to me!

When I tell you
what I wish you knew
how much better you'd feel
if I could break through
But you're caught in a cycle
you keep spinning 'round
and I'm trying to pull you out
before you drown
in all your emotions
all this guilt not your own
exaggerated, dramatic
and over-blown

You are used like a puppet
like a toy on their strings
so abused and exploited
for their own selfish things
that it feels overwhelming
too complicated to comprehend-
and you're much too frustrated
too exhausted to pretend
that you believe anymore
in those fairy tale endings
holding on to your sadness
depression defending

What I wish you knew
what I wish you could see
How I was like you
how I came to be free...
How I stopped taking blame
for another one's shame
How I firmly took hold
of the things I control
How I recognized the difference
and let the rest go!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/27/2018 11:20:00 PM
Much wise advice here, Rhona - but as you say, you can't control someone else's choices, only your own - and there's the conundrum!
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/28/2018 12:47:00 PM
Yes, very true- they do have to want it for themselves...
Date: 11/22/2018 3:39:00 PM
I am thinking of a person but their problem is a bit opposite in that THEY are doing all the puppeteering and making everyone upset at them. but they will listen to nobody and their life continues on a downward path. It's all so sad!
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/23/2018 6:51:00 PM
Yes, I've seen that, too- this type of situation is pretty ugly and destructive on both sides. Very sad...
Date: 11/22/2018 3:39:00 PM
and as always, a well written poem.
Login to Reply
Mcferran Avatar
Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/23/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank you! ;)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad