What I Wish You Knew

Sitting silently here
and listening to you
thinking to myself
what I wish you knew
of how different your life
could actually be
if you would only
listen to me!

When I tell you
what I wish you knew
how much better you'd feel
if I could break through
But you're caught in a cycle
you keep spinning 'round
and I'm trying to pull you out
before you drown
in all your emotions
all this guilt not your own
exaggerated, dramatic
and over-blown

You are used like a puppet
like a toy on their strings
so abused and exploited
for their own selfish things
that it feels overwhelming
too complicated to comprehend-
and you're much too frustrated
too exhausted to pretend
that you believe anymore
in those fairy tale endings
holding on to your sadness
depression defending

What I wish you knew
what I wish you could see
How I was like you
how I came to be free...
How I stopped taking blame
for another one's shame
How I firmly took hold
of the things I control
How I recognized the difference
and let the rest go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Much wise advice here, Rhona - but as you say, you can't control someone else's choices, only your own - and there's the conundrum!
Mcferran Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Yes, very true- they do have to want it for themselves...
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 3:39 PM
I am thinking of a person but their problem is a bit opposite in that THEY are doing all the puppeteering and making everyone upset at them. but they will listen to nobody and their life continues on a downward path. It's all so sad!
Mcferran Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Yes, I've seen that, too- this type of situation is pretty ugly and destructive on both sides. Very sad...
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 3:39 PM
and as always, a well written poem.
Mcferran Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you! ;)
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