Valsa George Poet Rhyme

What I See- Nursery Rhyme

I see gulls gliding in the air.
I watch them landing down in pair.
All around me is the sea.

I see waves beating on the shore.
I hear them gnarl and roar.

I see Dolphins in the vast expanse.
I see them swim and dance.

I see ships sailing over waters wide.
I watch them quiver and glide.

I see shells strewn on the beach.
I pick up all that is within my reach.

I see children of my age sit and play.
Occasionally shouting ‘hooray’!

I see with every wave, a jet of spray.
They drench me as they come in sway.

I see waves rising high.
They seem to reach up to the sky.
All around me is the sea!

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March. 29.2023

~ Placed First~

Children Sing to Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Sam Kauffman April 10, 2023 at 11:42 AM What a wonderful picture of a day at the beach in song and rhyme Valsa! Your words bring back so many wonderful memories of summer days at the ocean or lake! You do have such an amazing ability to put me right in the middle of your picture! I do love it. Makes me feel like a kid again looking for shells, wading in the water and feeling happy sunshine sweet friend. So wonderful to see this delight on the winners list. Almost time to go to the beach! Congrats andEaster blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2023 at 2:35 AM - Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler April 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM This is sweetness and fun Valsa. Congratulations on your win! :)

Len Gasun April 7, 2023 at 9:23 PM I love this a lot. This is such a delightful and beautiful nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dearest poet friend Valsa. Lovely images too. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always.

Eve Roper April 7, 2023 at 5:06 PM Valsa, congratulations on your win on your poem, “What I See". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve Valsa George April 7, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thank you so much Eve for picking up poem for a first place win. Also for the opportunity given.

Speaks Volumes April 7, 2023 at 12:30 PM Congratulations on your placing in the contest for this lovely nursery rhyme Valsa

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2023 at 11:37 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write again. Have a blessed day................

Joanna Daniel March 30, 2023 at 4:29 AM Hi Valsa, another sweet poem of yours:) p.s: I want to send you a soup mail, but can't find the icon, maybe you have not allowed soup mail in your settings, can you change it, please? Valsa George March 30, 2023 at 5:19 AM Hi Joanna, thank you. Glad you liked my poem. Most of the time, my soup mail doesn't work properly giving wrong notifications. Now I have sent a soup mail to you. Hope it reaches you .

Gershon Wolf March 29, 2023 at 7:15 PM I see Valsa writing away. She is happy all day! Cheers, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2023 at 11:59 AM Very well done for the contest,, Valsa. i know she will like this one.

Sotto Poet March 29, 2023 at 8:25 AM Very incredibly lovely, Valsa! A perfect contribution, given the nature of the contest. These are the melodies that youngsters fall in love with and continue to repeat over and over again! Sending you hugs and the best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith March 29, 2023 at 8:24 AM A fun write for kids. Good luck. Have a wonderful day.........................

Daniel Turner March 29, 2023 at 7:24 AM All fun stuff, Valsa. What kid doesn't love a day at the beach. They sould sing this on their way there and /or back home.

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 29, 2023 at 6:53 AM How beautiful! These are the images children fall in love with, and sing again and again! Hugs ~ Mala

Stephan McBride March 29, 2023 at 6:27 AM This is great, such a peaceful and beautiful scene,just taking it all in,. Thanks for sharing your amazing gift with us all : )

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2023 at 6:14 AM I see those images you convey through your words, Valsa. Aptly delivered for the contest theme.

Joseph P. DiMino March 29, 2023 at 5:44 AM Delightful. You not only see, but record and inform with marvelous acuity. Great poetry! Thank you for sharing.

Speaks Volumes March 29, 2023 at 4:14 AM A lovely song for children to sing Valsa

Sara Kendrick March 29, 2023 at 3:57 AM Good one for the contest and it is a teaching one as well with the use of sea and see. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ryan Gayagay March 29, 2023 at 3:22 AM I love it--the imagery, the innocence, the playfulness. Best of luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2023 at 2:50 AM - A lovely poem that children will enjoy, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Valsa George March 29, 2023 at 4:43 AM Thanks a lot Smile for reminding me of the line limit. I have reduced them to eighteen !