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What I miss:

The scents of fancy foods and good intent
The hugs of friends at church and sinners' lament
Foods we share on celebration Sunday, rest in my chair
Sometimes I think this whole situation totally unfair

Substitutions I like:  

Riding down to Flint River, a sliver of respite 
Gone from cesspit of isolation and COVID 19 the despot 
Then go by Diary Queen for a treat; so, so neat
A two for one on Sunday, a Sundae full of sweet


What I miss:

The weekly visits inspissate family ties
When we come together, no matter the weather time flies
We enjoy a meal, have our fill until
How the time flies, we part with goodwill

How God blessed from the herb garden:

Tiny yellow butterflies, such small fellows land
Their presence upon the pineapple sage so grand
Hummingbirdmoths feed at the troth of Maximillia sunflower
The giant fuchsia zinnias compliant to Monarch's scour

All in all God has blessed 
He lifts me up; He's my guest
Sometimes I'm lonely and sometimes sad
But God fills voids and listens to my request

Finis'

Written: November 01, 2020
Sponsor: Joseph May
Contest: In Rhymes Sublime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/20/2020 10:23:00 AM
Sara, this is so creative. Wonderful format and rhymes. A beautiful hymn of praise. Congratulations on your win! Harvest blessings! (I too love the DQ!)
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:36:00 AM
Sam, Thanks for the visit with your nice comment and congrats. Yes, DQ is a good place to visit occasionally. Sara
Date: 11/19/2020 11:16:00 AM
Dropping by with congrats Sara, well done my friend a fine win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/20/2020 7:49:00 AM
Jennifer, Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara
Date: 11/19/2020 8:59:00 AM
Very nicely penned Sara, Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/20/2020 7:48:00 AM
Joseph, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 11/19/2020 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Sara! Linda
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Date: 11/19/2020 10:29:00 AM
Liinda, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 11/11/2020 3:45:00 PM
Amen, Sara. You certainly haven't 'missed' with this special write. Sublime rhyme, for sure. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 11/12/2020 3:45:00 AM
Gershon, Thanks..I am honored that you like it. Sara
Date: 11/8/2020 11:15:00 AM
So you also talk to God Sara? He is my best friend and I tell him everything. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/12/2020 3:42:00 AM
Jennifer, Without Him we would be nothing. He is the One Who carries us through but some people are not aware of it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 11/5/2020 3:28:00 PM
this is beautifully written. i am living pretty much the same during this plandemic, Sara. Just put on my mask in the places that demand it. I get to teach on Zoom, so actually life is better for me now. I can sleep in and not have to waste gas driving to school!!
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Date: 11/6/2020 3:08:00 AM
Andrea, Thanks for the compliment. I don't get out much. My daughters came yesterday for the first time in about 6 weeks. Doris and Wayne had the virus about a month ago and Phyllis' husband tore his Achilles tendon and had to have surgery so she has been home looking after him and avoiding coming here for fear of getting the virus. It was good to get together once again. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 11/3/2020 12:27:00 PM
lovely positive write, my friend - more people should count their blessings
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Date: 11/6/2020 3:01:00 AM
Jack, We all should count the good moments and the good things that we are given and life would be better. Thanks for all the visits to my pages. Sara
Date: 11/2/2020 7:20:00 PM
Ah! I too miss all the same things you do, but am forever grateful for all the beauty of the world right outside my door. Thank you for this lovely uplifting poem, dear Sara. ~ Elaine
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Date: 11/3/2020 3:41:00 AM
Elaine, I am so glad that you appreciate the beauty outside your door. If a person can do that, on any day there will always be something to enjoy and be grateful for. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Date: 11/2/2020 3:55:00 AM
Wonderfully written Sarah, Those were golden days when we were kids... I really miss that time. Stay blessed.
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Date: 11/2/2020 6:28:00 AM
Paghunda, Yes, some of the time when I was young was wonderful and there were sad times and poverty times as well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 11/1/2020 3:44:00 PM
I came back to see the finish to your poem and it’s magnificent. What’re we are going through we can look at God’s wonderful world and His love seeps through... Belle
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Date: 11/2/2020 5:30:00 AM
Belle, I was feeling so down for reasons other than what the world as a whole is going through now and I felt God sent in those butterflies for there had been in times past maybe three or four of them then there were at least twenty of those tiny yellow butterflies drinking from the pineapple sage's blooms which are red. I went out to take a closer look and there were hummingbird moths on the zinnias and orange monarchs as well and four times as many blooms on the zinnias and sage as has been all summer. Thanks for dropping back by. Sara
Date: 11/1/2020 2:35:00 PM
These are strange times indeed but our faith keeps us warm. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 11/2/2020 5:22:00 AM
David, I don't see how people who have no faith make it through. Thanks for your visit. Sara
Date: 11/1/2020 8:29:00 AM
Those were the days, Sara... There are no days like when we were young... Nostalgic poem...
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:00:00 PM
SO, Thanks for your visit to my page. Yes, there were some good times when we were young and there were always those bad times as well. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 11/1/2020 8:10:00 AM
I miss all of those things too, what on earth is it all coming to, great write... Belle
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Date: 11/1/2020 11:56:00 AM
Belle, I think the stage is being set for the end of time when Jesus calls His church home and the antichrist appears on the stage. It seems to be all falling in place. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
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