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What I Bring

what i bring is i bring myself my lonely heart my broken self i have no deciet inside only love and only pride with my heart i see and feel everything that's fake and real will you take apon your heart the weight of love that i impart whispers carresses and tenderness arms wraped around you breast to breast sometimes fighting but sure of this one thing making up makes me want to sing so what is it you ask that i bring i bring my whole self my entire being

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Date: 12/11/2009 7:57:00 PM
An excellent write. You bared your soul and showed your self. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/6/2009 6:09:00 PM
Yes, sir ... this is the write of greatness, the poem made from the poet's soul. Good write, my friend, best of the season to you
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:47:00 AM
Hey John, Sorry, I missed this one- but it's said it is better late than never- LOVE IS ALL, is my belief and that should be enough for anyone! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:59:00 PM
Love is the most beautiful emotion on this planet.. your words are touching and deeply moving, John, enjoyed this read.. happy Sunday with blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/5/2009 5:55:00 PM
I posted a christmas poem
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Date: 12/5/2009 11:54:00 AM
Love is all about giving yourself..and it seems an easy task to give all your love ,cos you ve got plenty of it,Sweet and Romantic indeed John--Charma
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:02:00 PM
Very good apology in this write. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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