What Happens To Most Demons, Part I

The first sensation that he felt
was a wall of real, searing pain,
that lasted an eternity,
until it was etched in his brain.

All around him was blue fire,
raining blades and forests of whips,
the air was caustic miasma,
each breath made his very lungs rip.

The first break in his suffering,
the first moment the pain turned off,
was when the Devil himself came,
said, “Your name will be Dezeroth.

“I made you to do my bidding,
a demon conceived in real sin,
you’re a slave, and I’m your master,
my knife in the war against Him.

“But you are now far from ready,
my greatness you must understand,
and know what is awaiting you
Ii you cross the Prince of the Damned.”

And then the torture recommenced,
it continued for countless years,
his flesh was rent, his bones broken,
Dez weeping with sulfurous tears.

When what will he had was shattered,
and there hadn’t been much to start,
Satan returned with a dark grin,
said, “Now you’re ready for your part.

“Plenty of demons are in Hell
punishing man’s oft-wretched souls,
but I need more of you above,
to destroy them and make them cold.

“To prove God was wrong to make them,
that they’re soiled, imperfect things,
do well and you won’t return here,
fail and there will be more burning.”

Dez leapt at the chance to escape,
and to this mission he agreed,
he knew but pain, and to end this
he would gladly make millions bleed.

Who were they not to suffer so?
It seemed to him a great insult,
like they were laughing at his life,
he’d bring all of that to a halt.

He’d do whatever he had to,
ensure that to evil they’d fall,
after the aeons of torment
he’d kill to feel nothing at all.

And so the Devil said the world,
Dezeroth felt his body shift,
then rose to Earth in human form,
to prey on the lost souls adrift.

He found himself in a town park,
with clothes, and wallet, and ID,
the Devil, it seemed, had provided
for a demon who did his duty.

But something else struck him hard then,
something that he did not expect,
human bodies feel many things
that the nature of Hell reject.

He felt the cool rasping air,
it was refreshing in his lungs,
his muscles did not hurt one bit,
in fact they felt quite strong, and young.

And colors that he did not know
now flourished right before his eyes,
blue, and yellow, and green, and white,
down in Hell only red survived.

CONTINUES IN PART II.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter