Andrea Dietrich Poet Limerick

What Goes Up

What goes up must come down, but what Blair,
a disgusting dude, threw in the air
was not too appealing.
What stuck to the ceiling -
not to come down - was Blair’s underwear.

Written March 5, 2016 for the What Goes Up Must Come Down Poetry Contest
of Catie Lindsey

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Daver Austin March 11, 2016 at 4:41 PM A disgustingly funny opus, dear Andrea. When that there missile comes down, I don't wanta be around. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong March 9, 2016 at 3:46 PM A clever write Andrea. I think I have read all of your poems now. It is hard catching up. I have been entering more contests, but it sure is time consuming. GL in the contest!

Lindsay Laurie March 8, 2016 at 9:21 PM Ha-Ha - very witty ... disgusting on more fronts than one - Lindsay

James Inman March 8, 2016 at 11:27 AM Funny, Andrea.

Casarah Nance March 7, 2016 at 2:14 PM Lol.. funny

Daniel Turner March 6, 2016 at 6:04 PM No you didn't! LOL This is disgustingly funny. Peace my dear:)

Tim Smith March 6, 2016 at 10:31 AM very funny Andrea

Constance La France March 5, 2016 at 11:43 PM Andrea, lol, I guess you do not think too much of Blair, this is hilarious, and I am loving it 7 ~

Eve Roper March 5, 2016 at 9:29 PM Haha.... you made me laugh sweet girl :) good luck in the contest. I still don't know what to write for this one.

Michael Tor March 5, 2016 at 7:57 PM Andrea outside your comfort zone on this one lol.. Can't say I enjoyed it, lol. Pictured it in my mind and It put a smile on my face.

Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2016 at 6:52 PM Not your usual, good luck in the contest Andrea. Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2016 at 7:24 PM aw come on, Richard. it's a nasty limerick is all!!!

Harry Horsman March 5, 2016 at 4:53 PM Different Andrea, and most welcomed, you certainly sharpen your pen for this one...

Robert Heemstra March 5, 2016 at 2:56 PM Good luck in the contest Andrea! Wasn't that an Earth, Wind, and Fire song, hat goes up?

Maurice Yvonne March 5, 2016 at 11:57 AM It happens! A limerick in its intended form. The word crude can be found in the definition. That is what it is meant to be. A Fav!

Bl Devnath March 5, 2016 at 11:45 AM Ceiling has a big hole so passed by. Nice Limerick, good luck my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Shadow Hamilton March 5, 2016 at 4:42 AM yuck but a very good limerick Andy hugs 7

Timothy Hicks March 5, 2016 at 1:53 AM EWwww ... I thought it was gum or something ... now I'm wondering what would make it stick! Funny take on the contest ... the rhythm is different than your typical limerick. Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2016 at 7:22 PM haha, Where is your imagination, Timothy?