What Fascinates Me

What happens when we die? I really want to know!
I’m getting up in age and am ready for the show!

Religious fundamentalists say things won’t be good
for souls unbaptized or for those not living as they should.

I went to church when younger and followed rules as well,
but I hear discrepancies regarding heaven and hell.

Because I’m not one given to spiritual displays
such as Holy Roller moments, I’m somewhat in a daze!

Testimonies others give confound me even more.
Would God send most to hell if they didn’t know what for?

The Chinese have no preachers. People think so differently
depending on their upbringing; it’s all perplexing me!

And so with fascination, I read books or I hear
of people having NDE’s, which takes away my fear. 

Away from Heaven’s lovely light these “dead” souls get yanked back.
Inside their bodies once again, fear’s now a thing they lack!

How marvelous it has to be – to feel within your heart
sensations of that place from which you did not wish to part.

All things regarding after-life and pre-existence too
make me utterly enthralled. I know such things are true.

Too many people have things happen while they’re lying dead
for it to be hallucinations . It’s truth to which they’re led.

Reincarnation also once had been a Christian view.
Astrology ties into this, and that I’ve studied too.

I think the minds of humans are too small to comprehend
the otherworldly things we all will learn of in the end.

Psychics, ghosts, UFO’s, and things like ESP.
What do they mean? How awesome really knowing it would be!


May 24, 2022 for Jeff Kyser's Fascination And Awe Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/3/2022 11:28:00 PM
A superb write on the topic What Fascinates Me. Many questions come in our mind especially on what comes after death. But for me, I believe we all go back to our Creator who lent us our life. I'm so delighted to read this precious gem of yours my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. Congrats on your win! God bless you. Hugs
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Date: 6/3/2022 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Love your ending. Many questions in life and about death. Guess we will never have all of the answers. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 6/3/2022 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea: All I know is we are energy and energy can’t be destroyed. If they could prove the soul exists all the mystery of life and death would be gone. We know for sure there is good and evil and that we are capable of both.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/3/2022 4:55:00 AM
I guess the big question is to what degree we deviate. The other theory is all is predestined and that free will is an illusion. Check out this book. https://www.amazon.com/User-Illusion-Cutting-Consciousness-Penguin/dp/0140230122/ref=asc_df_0140230122/?tag=hyprod-20&linkCode=df0&hvadid=312696355873&hvpos=&hvnetw=g&hvrand=9700713602483057865&hvpone=&hvptwo=&hvqmt=&hvdev=c&hvdvcmdl=&hvlocint=&hvlocphy=1020991&hvtargid=pla-449714416249&psc=1
Date: 6/3/2022 12:18:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you. (It's my prayer that you will have the faith to accept the offer of the Lord Who grants eternal life to those who believe in Him as John 3:16 of the Bible asserts).
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Date: 6/2/2022 7:05:00 PM
My kindred sister, I love your entry! We believe the same about most everything. You remember my mother had a NDE which is why I believe in the afterlife and reincarnation. You have touched on so many aspects in your wonderful poem Andrea, and expressed them splendidly. Congratulations on your HM in Jeff’s Premiere contest. I am Faving this gem! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2022 2:00:00 PM
Andrea - I really enjoyed this - I have my own perspective, but I loved the thought process and the “big questions” considered in all of this. And yes, I suspect our minds are too small to comprehend. Thanks so much for entering the contest!
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Date: 5/27/2022 8:38:00 AM
Andrea, you and I are of one mind! I could have said, at one time, every line you've written, and I've always been fascinated by things unknown! Best of luck in the contest :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/27/2022 8:50:00 AM
Also, I'm a strong believer in Reincarnation and even gave a talk to a spiritual group I was in about NDEs. I think they prove its truth. Wow - your poem has opened people up. That's wonderful!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/27/2022 8:46:00 AM
Also, I'm a strong believer in Reincarnation and even gave a talk to a spiritual group I was in about NDEs. I think they prove its truth. Wow - your poem has opened people up. That's wonderful!
Date: 5/25/2022 12:01:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You have penned a well-written, thought-provoking piece. I, too, wonder about what happens when we die. In my humble opinion, I don't think folk is “ fine” with dying. But learn to accept because it's inevitable. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:30:00 PM
Alexis, on the documentaries for NDE's, the folks who came back to life actually look forward to dying. They do not fear it at all because they know they are going to a better place. I envy them for having that kind of conviction!
Date: 5/25/2022 8:21:00 AM
I love your honesty and passion for knowledge, Andrea. Your poem is thought provoking and must each find the answers for ourselves. Others thoughts and experiences are only resources we have to consider of the many possibilities before us. Search on my friend. The end here is not the end. (In my humble opinion).
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:30:00 PM
for sure. the end is not the end.
Date: 5/24/2022 10:56:00 PM
Andrea so much to say to this thought provoking piece. The aliens, and UFO's are demonic beings, the bible speaks of the occult, and claravoyence. It describes all this content. Read my Pinebush story, it will give you some insight to these beings...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:31:00 PM
i have read your pinebush story and how the aliens were evil. Do you think it's possible they perhaps live in a part of our world that is not even from outer space. There are stories of "good aliens" too. So much to understand one day!
Date: 5/24/2022 9:11:00 PM
Andrea, I love your curiosity and your ability to put down your stream of consciousness in poignant yet playful form. There are so many things we do not know. Our brains are hardly being utilized. Love the depth in this ! I too want to know .Blessings, Susan :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, susan.
Date: 5/24/2022 2:48:00 PM
No one knows for sure what's on the other side of death. And you clearly explain the reason---I think the minds of humans are too small to comprehend the otherworldly things we all will learn of in the end---Much depth to your dialogue, Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:07:00 PM
thanks so much, Vijay.
Date: 5/24/2022 1:15:00 PM
an excellent poem for the contest, andrea! you've covered all the bases. best of luck!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:07:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene.
Date: 5/24/2022 11:40:00 AM
I've spent a lifetime studying the things you write about here. I have no fear of death whatsoever, and I don't believe the prevalent ideas of heaven and hell. Nonsense to me. The NT teaches reincarnation. It's an old, old tenet no longer recognized by fundamentalists, but Jesus believed in it. Deb said it was the greatest journey she'd ever take, and I believe that, too. Come to your own sense of peace, not allowing others to feed you their theories, as though they know more than you do.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:07:00 PM
I believe some Roman emperor got rid of reincarnation belief because he did not like how it empowered people. Because of others' past lives stories, I am really interested in reincarnation.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:06:00 PM
yes, I don't fear death any more either, especially with problems I am having. I almost welcome the relief death will bring. Who are you referring to when you say Deb?
Date: 5/24/2022 10:54:00 AM
This is really well thought and done! Most Americans cannot even imagine how Native Americans could live without a church or leaders to restrict them to the straight and narrow! But no need to rush to The End, as everything is best in its season. Aloha!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:08:00 PM
thanks, Rico, I would love to go back and time to see how my Cherokee ancestors lived with their beliefs about the next life.
Date: 5/24/2022 10:43:00 AM
Our whole existence is one big mystery and up till now we only have theories, even scientists like Darwin and Hawking have put things down to the miraculous. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2022 3:09:00 PM
Some of our greatest thinkers have professed belief in a creator. The world is far too organized to have sprung up from nothing but a big bang.
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