L Milton Hankins Poet Free verse

What Fascinates Me

I stand in awe of courageous women
Brave women who have broken out
Thrown off the shackles of domination
Said there is more to life, I deserve it
Who speak passionately without fear
And are willing to die for a just cause.

I stand in awe of thoughtful women
Who raise their children with values
Teaching them to do what is right
Admonishing them when necessary
Realizing they are molding the future.

I stand in awe of strong women
Who claim their rightful place in life
Teaching by excellent example
Unafraid to be bold when bullied.

I stand in awe of gracious women
Who stand tall and wear a smile
Who are admired for their presence.

I stand in awe of talented women
Who sing, dance and make us laugh.

I stand in awe of my mother! 

Written May 16, 2022
Submitted to “Fascination and Awe” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Jeff Kyser
[The title doesn't really fit my poem, but I can
change it after the contest]

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Caren Krutsinger May 17, 2022 at 2:16 PM "I stand in awe of strong women Who claim their rightful place in life Teaching by excellent example" What a lovely tribute to ALL women! L Milton Hankins May 17, 2022 at 2:49 PM Thanks, Caren. Of course I had my mom in mind when I wrote this one.

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 17, 2022 at 6:25 AM Dear Milton, your poem paying tribute to women, and especially your Mom, is fascinating! truly enjoyed, and sending to my faves. Best wishes ~ mala L Milton Hankins May 17, 2022 at 7:00 AM Well, thank you so very much, Mala. I appreciate your affirming comment.

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 16, 2022 at 8:32 PM So beautifully written, with warmth and appreciation in every line, Milton. A remarkable contest entry. Evelyn L Milton Hankins May 17, 2022 at 7:00 AM Thanks, Evelyn. It was a joy to write, and I hope it will do well in the contest.

Beryl Edmonds May 16, 2022 at 4:47 PM How lovely it is to read this poem Milton, your appreciation of the good traits women possess is wonderful and your mother must be very proud of you… Belle L Milton Hankins May 16, 2022 at 6:58 PM Thanks, Belle. I suppose she would be, but she passed on when I was fifteen years old. She's in my mind and heart everyday though.

Bill Baker May 16, 2022 at 4:40 PM It got my attention. Either title will do just fine. Great tribute to strong women, Milt. I totally agree with your poem. A poet friend in Texas, Bill L Milton Hankins May 16, 2022 at 6:58 PM Thanks so much, Bill, for your affirming comment.

Ilene Bauer May 16, 2022 at 1:53 PM a beautiful and very moving poem, milton! L Milton Hankins May 16, 2022 at 4:09 PM Thanks so much, Ilene. I really appreciate your comments.

Jenna Logan May 16, 2022 at 1:02 PM and I admire you for bringing to light those qualities we, as women, strive for. I hope I can live up to just a speck of light in your eyes, Milt. Jenna Logan May 16, 2022 at 2:13 PM You're very welcome, Milt. I should be thanking you for your response, so "Thank you." I've sent you mail. L Milton Hankins May 16, 2022 at 1:37 PM Oh, believe me, you do, Jenna. Every one of your poems brightens my day, and your comments are always gentle, yet bold; forthright, but fair. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

William Kelii Kekaula May 16, 2022 at 11:21 AM Nicely done, Milt, with your shining revelation attributed to your mom. It's quality penning deserving a righteous placing my friend, Aloha~William L Milton Hankins May 16, 2022 at 12:59 PM Thanks, William. The title he wants didn't exactly fit, but I figured I could change it after the contest. I appreciate your thoughtful and kind comment.