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Walking a tightrope without a net; with an appetite for hope Our lives echo similar outcomes as we walk into the future Turning empty pages of our lives with our eyes open or closed A desire of composing chronicles Like the Desirable Immortal Ocean Its tendrils crawling upon the sands On a moonlight requisition Than wanes back into the abyss Constituting remnants in its bowels Creating new fate of phenomenons left behind
-72 words March 6, 2017 Poetry Contest: What Doesn't Kill Us Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 3/12/2017 7:15:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win with this deep write, Eve:) many congratulations:)
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Date: 3/10/2017 12:02:00 PM
Congrats eve to win on your wonderful poem. Love
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Date: 3/10/2017 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful, Eve. Great images. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2017 9:13:00 AM
Eve, you hit it on the nail...lovely and what I was looking for in this contest...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2017 10:59:00 PM
Oh, thank you so very much Hugs Eve
Date: 3/7/2017 11:10:00 AM
- Oh, this was beautiful Eve - A winning poem ... (good luck) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:28:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Eve, Very deep and thought provoking and so well written. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:26:00 AM
A lovely poem for the contest, Eve:)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:51:00 AM
I suspect this will do well Eve. Great job!
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:34:00 PM
This is awesome, Eve - AWESOME, I tell you! btw, did you mean eye .. close / or closed? This blew me away in the best way, I just love it. Good luck in all things ... CayCay 7 (and I think you left me a comment that you didn't know what to write for this contest! well, your muse did!)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/6/2017 11:43:00 PM
Thank you thank you dear friend ~* <3 Hugs Eve
Date: 3/6/2017 10:57:00 PM
Profound and beautiful ... Looks a winner ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/6/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Probir, I'm truly lost with this one so I just wrote that came to my sight.. Hugs dear friend ~*

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