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What Does It Take

If I write 3 lines Do I also have to kiss behinds If I have the blues Will you give this some views If I write about vomit Will I get a comment

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Audrey Haick

Date: 7/2/2010 11:20:00 AM

Hey Michael, welcome to PS and thanks for the comments on my poem. Haven't been here much lately as other commitments multiply! LOL but glad you commented! that's how I discovered your good work! I like this one-straight from the heart and to the point! It's sad but true; however there are a few of us who care and leave comments, like James, the Highlander, below, Carolyn Devonshire, Linda-Marie Celene, Jessica, and others. More comments you leave the more you'll get! Peace, love, Audrey!

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2010 3:28:00 PM

Michael, the Soup does lack this task of commenting. It's system does need shaken up, ideas have been blogged, but they have fallen on stoney ground. It's been a pleasure reading about your past. My task to you is too write about things your wife liked. Did she like travelling, places, flowers, films, singers etc. You do enjoy writing about her, let her live on in your words. I look forward to reading them. Pleased to read you >> James

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/1/2010 7:30:00 AM

ah ja i know the feeling but hey! if no comments at least you know people are reading with your views area, and thanks for the honest comment, it wasn't mean in any way, if you don't like bananas, you don't like bananas :P