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Narcissus dwells beside the stream, content to gaze, and not to be. In all those wonder years-- consumed in self-indulgence, he limped through snatches of reality, joined hands with infant consciousness, then slipped away into himself. He's back, left-brained and prideful, his image unenhanced and lost beneath the roily surface of desire. His seeking is the storm, the passion clarity denied. So too, the space for any denizen of paradise to read the beauty lurking there, for ego never visited the fathom sanctuary of compassion and of peace. His fingers touch the water, but the universe is far away; there is no god at all or even self to smile at him-- no contemplation of a purity he could not know. Alone, he could not weep. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/22/2013 1:14:00 AM
."Is this what narcissus saw forever gazing in a pool." That is line from a poem I wrote ( not posted yet) Seems we touch on similar symbols in our writing. Interesting.
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