What Do You See


Why do you look at me so?

When you glare into my eyes,
     is it defiance I see,

or tenderness  mixed with caring 
     and,      perhaps,      a touch of mystery.

Your gentle eyes bewilder me
with the spark of the mid-day sun,
set against the cool of an evening breeze,
with the sheen of the moon
and twinkle of the stars,

     they mesmerize me.

Are they a portal through which 
you can set yourself free
     to open your tender heart to me.

...Is that what you want me to see?

For long moments our eyes seem to meet,
not as a stare unfocused and cold,
but seeing each other with a meaningful gleam.

Your long gaze I hold in hope
that I find the real you
     hidden somewhere deep inside.

...Is that what you wish to see in me,

my reality, the real me, the man I am,

or the man you want me to be.

Your beautiful eyes, that so intensely
watch me, mirror the image
that I wish I could be,  

the strong yet gentle man 
     that captures your desire,

the laughter that hides deep inside of me,

the smile that only you can coax from my dreams,

but as I look closer all that I see 
     is the reflection of the ordinary me.

Yet, before you look away
     I wish for there to be 

a moment in my eyes 
     when you can see that I will always be

the one whose feelings run incredibly deep,

the one you can rely on,

the one who will be there for you,
     and always will, 

...if you but want me to be.


04/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hagy Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:17 AM
A beautiful write of such yearning and desire James!...may all your wishes come true... :)
Inman Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment Chris.
Williams Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 8:16 AM
A wonderful poem and a great sentiment. Yes indeed, if we can only read minds - perhaps we all can and the message is clearly in the loved ones eyes - the eyes are the windows of ones soul - for all to read even though the message is obscure - So bring back the laughter my friend. Another FAVE from me James...Maria :)
Inman Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you Maria, from your photo you have very expressive eyes that show a lot of emotion. As you say, the message can be read but sometimes it seems to be in a language foreign to me and it takes a long time to translate. Sadly, I often make mistakes.
Wigley Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:26 AM
If one could wish with one's eyes, maybe our dreams would all come true. A fine write, James. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Perhaps, Viv, what a beautiful thought (but I am afraid it would be a very fuzzy dream for me, I can't see much without my readers anymore). Thanks for the nice comment.
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