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What Do You See

Why do you look at me so? When you glare into my eyes, is it defiance I see, or tenderness mixed with caring and, perhaps, a touch of mystery. Your gentle eyes bewilder me with the spark of the mid-day sun, set against the cool of an evening breeze, with the sheen of the moon and twinkle of the stars, they mesmerize me. Are they a portal through which you can set yourself free to open your tender heart to me. ...Is that what you want me to see? For long moments our eyes seem to meet, not as a stare unfocused and cold, but seeing each other with a meaningful gleam. Your long gaze I hold in hope that I find the real you hidden somewhere deep inside. ...Is that what you wish to see in me, my reality, the real me, the man I am, or the man you want me to be. Your beautiful eyes, that so intensely watch me, mirror the image that I wish I could be, the strong yet gentle man that captures your desire, the laughter that hides deep inside of me, the smile that only you can coax from my dreams, but as I look closer all that I see is the reflection of the ordinary me. Yet, before you look away I wish for there to be a moment in my eyes when you can see that I will always be the one whose feelings run incredibly deep, the one you can rely on, the one who will be there for you, and always will, ...if you but want me to be. 04/14/2018

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Date: 4/17/2018 10:17:00 AM
A beautiful write of such yearning and desire James!...may all your wishes come true... :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/17/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment Chris.
Date: 4/15/2018 8:16:00 AM
A wonderful poem and a great sentiment. Yes indeed, if we can only read minds - perhaps we all can and the message is clearly in the loved ones eyes - the eyes are the windows of ones soul - for all to read even though the message is obscure - So bring back the laughter my friend. Another FAVE from me James...Maria :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/15/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Maria, from your photo you have very expressive eyes that show a lot of emotion. As you say, the message can be read but sometimes it seems to be in a language foreign to me and it takes a long time to translate. Sadly, I often make mistakes.
Date: 4/15/2018 1:26:00 AM
If one could wish with one's eyes, maybe our dreams would all come true. A fine write, James. Regards, Viv
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Date: 4/15/2018 11:11:00 AM
Perhaps, Viv, what a beautiful thought (but I am afraid it would be a very fuzzy dream for me, I can't see much without my readers anymore). Thanks for the nice comment.

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