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What Did I Find?

"The faces of pretty flowers will brighten anyone's day." By Poet Today I took a walk down the street, and found a beautiful flower garden. I was in awe of the "Jewel" like flowers, some stretching their heads over the white fence. The "Gate" was open so I went in, the bunny heard me "Mutter" heavenly place. A weeping willow caught the sun in a "Shadow."

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/24/2025 8:05:00 AM

Love your theme, flowers. They are peeping out, the jonquils and forsythia; along with bunnies too, my grandson raises them for 4-H; he has between 25-30 depending on sales. They are a lot of work. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2025 9:16:00 AM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you love my fun "What Did I Find?" write. I had some bunnies as a child. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2025 2:39:00 AM

- Back with a congrats, Paula :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/24/2025 9:13:00 AM

Great to see you back here reading and writing again. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write. It is always great to see you here. Hugs...The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/23/2025 3:29:00 PM

"2 Place" What Did I Find?~Date Written: 3/19/2025~Written By Human.....

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/23/2025 12:03:00 PM

Paula, a sweet and beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/23/2025 3:32:00 PM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your best of luck in the contest. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, a sweet and beautiful poem. It was fun to write. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2025 7:01:00 AM

Absolutely love the quote, Paula! I thought who wrote it…it was the POET! Ooh, the poem, likewise curious! A fave! Indeed, Happy Spring!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:56:00 AM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write and loved my quote. I see FAV??? Thanks... You made my day a happy one. Happy Spring to you. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

John Read

Date: 3/20/2025 11:33:00 AM

Nature and all it's beauty, those colourful flowers certainly warm the heart Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 1:05:00 PM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write. Oh yes, beautiful and colorful flowers are something to see as they warm the heart. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2025 10:56:00 AM

- A beautiful poem and saying, Paula :) - Can you explain the word "mutter" to me...I can't find a translation for this word - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2025 1:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula :) - I understood the word in your poem ... googled a bit ... and I was able to write my suggestion :) - <3

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 1:02:00 PM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes in the contest. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, A beautiful poem and saying. "Mutter" to say something softly to your self. My line, "The "Gate" was open so I went in, the bunny heard me "Mutter" heavenly place. Hope this helps. Hugs... The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Ink Empress

Date: 3/20/2025 9:00:00 AM

Ah i see few use the same words in their poems, must be a prompt dear paula? If it is so, best wishes as youv written a beautiful and heartfelt poem as always! Hope you are doing well! Sending you light today and always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 10:22:00 AM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Yes, for a prompt. Blessings to you. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/19/2025 7:53:00 PM

This whimsical and lovely poem draws the reader in first with curiosity, which turns to deep satisfaction. The images are wonderful! Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 10:19:00 AM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be a, whimsical and lovely poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/19/2025 3:53:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Paula and wonderful write.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 10:15:00 AM

Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to have, Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed writing this one. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/19/2025 2:54:00 PM

What Did I Find?~Date Written: 3/19/2025~Written By Human.....