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What Did I Find?

"The faces of pretty flowers will brighten anyone's day." By Poet

Today I took a walk down the street,
and found a beautiful flower garden.
I was in awe of the "Jewel" like flowers, 
some stretching their heads over the white fence.
The "Gate" was open so I went in,
the bunny heard me "Mutter" heavenly place.
A weeping willow caught the sun in a "Shadow."

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2025

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Reason A. Poteet Date: 3/24/2025 8:05:00 AM Love your theme, flowers. They are peeping out, the jonquils and forsythia; along with bunnies too, my grandson raises them for 4-H; he has between 25-30 depending on sales. They are a lot of work. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and congratulations. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/24/2025 9:16:00 AM Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you love my fun "What Did I Find?" write. I had some bunnies as a child. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2025 2:39:00 AM - Back with a congrats, Paula :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/24/2025 9:13:00 AM Great to see you back here reading and writing again. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write. It is always great to see you here. Hugs...The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/23/2025 3:29:00 PM "2 Place" What Did I Find?~Date Written: 3/19/2025~Written By Human..... Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/23/2025 12:03:00 PM Paula, a sweet and beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/23/2025 3:32:00 PM Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your best of luck in the contest. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, a sweet and beautiful poem. It was fun to write. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/21/2025 7:01:00 AM Absolutely love the quote, Paula! I thought who wrote it…it was the POET! Ooh, the poem, likewise curious! A fave! Indeed, Happy Spring! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/21/2025 8:56:00 AM Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write and loved my quote. I see FAV??? Thanks... You made my day a happy one. Happy Spring to you. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

John Read Date: 3/20/2025 11:33:00 AM Nature and all it's beauty, those colourful flowers certainly warm the heart Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 1:05:00 PM Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun "What Did I Find?" write. Oh yes, beautiful and colorful flowers are something to see as they warm the heart. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2025 10:56:00 AM - A beautiful poem and saying, Paula :) - Can you explain the word "mutter" to me...I can't find a translation for this word - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2025 1:14:00 PM Thank you so much, Paula :) - I understood the word in your poem ... googled a bit ... and I was able to write my suggestion :) - <3 Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 1:02:00 PM Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes in the contest. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, A beautiful poem and saying. "Mutter" to say something softly to your self. My line, "The "Gate" was open so I went in, the bunny heard me "Mutter" heavenly place. Hope this helps. Hugs... The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Ink Empress Date: 3/20/2025 9:00:00 AM Ah i see few use the same words in their poems, must be a prompt dear paula? If it is so, best wishes as youv written a beautiful and heartfelt poem as always! Hope you are doing well! Sending you light today and always Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 10:22:00 AM Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be, a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Yes, for a prompt. Blessings to you. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/19/2025 7:53:00 PM This whimsical and lovely poem draws the reader in first with curiosity, which turns to deep satisfaction. The images are wonderful! Best wishes. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 10:19:00 AM Great to see you here reading and writing. Also for your Best wishes. Thank You.... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to be a, whimsical and lovely poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/19/2025 3:53:00 PM Beautiful imagery Paula and wonderful write. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 10:15:00 AM Great to see you here reading and writing. Thank You... Glad you found my fun "What Did I Find?" to have, Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed writing this one. The pretty garden holds beautiful flowers as a writer writes away..............

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/19/2025 2:54:00 PM What Did I Find?~Date Written: 3/19/2025~Written By Human..... Login to Reply