What Child Is This

Tell me something
You don’t know
And I’ll tell you something
You never will.
Not in this moment

And you will know love
As words on a page
And you will know life
As the lines on your mother’s forehead
And you will become
What was shrouded in mist
The silver white remembrance of a dream

And the scar worn on your shoulder blade
Will be from your words turning against you
Ruination in blind trust

But you will grow
And you will learn
You will look back at the mountains beneath you 
And you won’t regret climbing higher

Cause its where I became you
And you became me.
And we became one.

And the questions you will ask
Still won’t be answered 
What child is this?
What child are we?
What child am I?

Simply me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. Also I want to say this is a moving piece, I’m glad I stopped by.
Blade Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much Richard! Glad you stopped to read Merry Christmas to you, too.
Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Beautiful pen, Iris - congrats on your win!
Blade Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much! Have a nice day.
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:35 PM
Nicely done, congratulations on your win!
Blade Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this one.
Y. Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:23 PM
Hi Iris, You penned a good poem for the contest. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Blade Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Yes I did, and thank you so much. Have a nice day!
White Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Grats Iris!!! Well deserved win :)
Blade Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so much! It was my first one. And you as well!
White Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 5:19 AM
Great write Iris, we write for the same contest.... I understand your words, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Blade Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Yes we do, and I love your submission as well. Thank you and good luck to you too!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Wonderful :) xomo
Blade Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Thank you so much! Have a nice day.
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