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What Cannot Kill Me

Exploring unknown tracks beneath
Old moonless sky, in the ink of heart
Night becomes angst’s poison
Dark and strong:
Papyrus lies bare as thoughts fumble
Raking my verses...until hours change to dawn.

Lakes, egrets, and wildflowers croon 
That in the hush of silence and music, I find
A divine universe so nourished  within--
This roam a gleam    knowing any obstacle
Cannot drown, kill the splendor 
Of my art's passion to transcend fear.



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Contest of Brian Strand
You And Yours, Let's Get Perso
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mcgee Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 11:22 AM
...a divine universe so nourished within--beautifully said. Congratulations on your win.
Roper Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 5:20 PM
beautiful verse, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 6:35 AM
This talks beautifully of the night poet, Nette:) congratulations on your win:)
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win ~* Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 9:17 AM
so full of passion and imagery...beautiful poem lovely Nette..thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 6:08 PM
A totally different and interesting approach to creating a beautiful poem sculptured by your poetic eye and brought to life by your skills, like a fine work of art. This is very beautiful and so well penned. You see beyond what others could not or would not see, and for that you are gifted. Emile.
Turner Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Hard to see anything in this poem that would kill me, unless one could be killed from beauty:) Good luck, nette!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Like walking among the paths of poetry your writing is my dear, nette! So beautiful! A seven!
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Lovely, spellbinding writing Nette!
Parker Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 4:46 PM
sometimes reading your poetry is like gliding with a bird on soft breezes...to just enjoy
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Very beautiful dear nette
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:08 PM
- Skillfully written, Nette - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sabre Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:04 PM
An artist is driven to share himself come what may. A valuable, brilliant write from you who rise above pain and fear to inspire others.Thank you likewise for a successful contest!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Your darkest writes are still beautiful and filled with your passion for words. Love this! Lots of luck with this one...hugs, Rhonda
Roper Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Beautiful, Nette,, like always a genius in your work ~*
Green Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Always such beauty flows from you pen Nette that I have no idea how the word fear could ever relate.
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