What Am I

Who Art Thou?

Thou carriest me to distant clime, to Egypt in my mind.
I’m Cleopatra, naked. In thy folds, I solace find.
Thou art gentle, like sweet Antony. With body splayed, I lie
Upon thee in a valley, and above us is blue sky.

Those times, I come to visit thee with arms outstretched, for peace.
Other times, with steady strokes, I find in thee release.
Thou holdest me though I cut thee; thou art soothing like a balm.
I love  thee when thou art able to flow, clear and calm.

At times, thou canst rage. On those days, I've no need of thee,
But other times I move within thee, working mightily.
And when my body’s spent, I leave thee for a while
Until I see thee next, and thou wilt be for me, my Nile. 

This is a Thing!

A riddle poem for you, Rob
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.
Messina Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:16 AM
Very nice, Andrea. Congrats on your placement!
Carmack Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:54 AM
Congrats Andrea!
Walker Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Great write, words flowing like the Nile.
A  Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Andrea, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT
Wigley Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Lovely, Andrea, a classic. Congratulations. Viv x
Lawless Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 4:23 PM
back in the water again, eh Andrea. flowed just as sweetly the second time around.
Ryerson Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations and I understand
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , andrea
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 8:52 PM
very intriguing write Anthea congrats on win hugs
Van Akkeren Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations Andrea, i loved the flow very nile...like. cheers H
Lawless Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 3:36 PM
A somewhat sensual tribute to water. Flowed nicely and was aided by the archaic english scattered throughout. Nicely done.
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Andrea, for what thou the answer..LOL , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
Claudine Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 12:58 AM
this is sinfully beautiful, this sort of writing is illegal. I was born in Zimbabwe but I am Malawian, So I have a Malawian passport and right now i am living and working in Cape Town South Africa, Although towards June i'm planning on going to France to join their Foreign Legionnaires . Where are you from?
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:22 AM
You can have the Nile Andrea, its the dirtiest river I have ever seen. Great poem and congrats on your HM. Lee
Babcock Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congrats on your win on the contest. Very clever write on this one. Not feeling good today so not sure what is up. My stomach was acting up last night and took a power buster stomach pill(prescription one) but is not helping. Stomach feels funny-I feel funny. soup mail. love phyl
Quigley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:28 AM
Very nice Andrea. Congratulations
Merryman Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:03 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your HOnorable Mention. Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:43 PM
Very interesting and clever. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:13 PM
Congrats Andrea on HM in flowing waters my friend..with lovely creative lines of beauty..my friend..enjoy honor...
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:10 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this interesting piece
Song Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 7:20 AM
A great trip in time, Andrea. Such a well-written response to her poetry contest. Just glowingly elegant. Gwendolen
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:43 AM
Love your poem, but I liked it better before I 'caught on.' A delight.
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