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What Am I

What gave me away?
Was it my sway?

Or my long limber limbs
Like glasses with broken rims?

Oh sure, wind has its way with me,
But broken or uprooted, I’ll never be.

Neither short, not tall, could be my description.
My strength and elasticity, a better depiction.

Cry me a river is your first hint,
And for a second; I’m easily bent.

Not a flower, or a bush, but green if you please.
In a botanical listing, I’m found under trees.

What I am, I will proudly bellow.
 I’m known to most as a weeping willow.
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Narain Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 10:32 AM
Wow, a nice poem with lots of metaphors. Like your weeping willows ending.
Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:31 PM
Thanks for the visits, Jay. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Buhagiar Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:48 AM
I love weeping willows. Easily my favourite tree. Great riddle.
Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:30 PM
I do too, Victor. We always seem to find room for at least one at each new home we buy. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 11:42 PM
Such a graceful and clever riddle! I love how the clues unfold with rhythm and wit—especially 'cry me a river' and 'easily bent.' The reveal was satisfying and poetic. A lovely tribute to the weeping willow!
Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:28 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Fun write. Bill
Singh Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful play of words.Enjoyed reading the poem.
Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Thanks for the visit, Akham. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:12 PM
This one I got, but so enjoyable, Bill. Nice job. ~ Gershon
Baker Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:07 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Bill
Crandall Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Nice riddle, revealed at the end!
Baker Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:07 PM
Yep, I just thought it would be a fun write. Bill
DiMino Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Great writing, Bill! A healing tree. You get a FAV!
Baker Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:08 PM
Thanks for the FAV, Joe. Have a great day! Bill
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Bill Baker poet!
Baker Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Abdullah, a poet friend of mine. Bill
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