What About Me

Lying here, do YOU know how much it hurts? Listening to YOU tell me YOU don’t care; to
watch YOU lead YOUR life with whomever YOU choose. Do YOU know what that does to me? i
can’t take it! i must not stand for it; do i have a choice? If only YOU knew how much YOU
hurt me..... Wait! YOU do. Yet YOU still don’t care. 

My life is rock bottom. i feel the bedrock embedded in me. i pull gravel from my soul
every moment, and i feel the earth in my stomach. 

Live YOUR life! YOU think i don’t watch anymore; i do. YOU think i couldn’t possibly care;
I’m here. YOU never visit, and YOU never so much as bat an eye at me. YOU make it seem my
fault, as if this is what i wanted. YOU drive around and do as YOU please; don’t care for
me really. Just continue on. Don’t give me a second thought.

Go ahead and break the soil.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 11, 2009 at 10:43 AM
So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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September 10, 2009 at 8:22 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 9, 2009 at 6:39 PM
Staven - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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September 9, 2009 at 6:04 AM
Hi Steven, thanks for sharing your heartfelt poem with us. Congrats on feature write! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 8, 2009 at 2:36 PM
Steven, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Steven. Love, Carol
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September 7, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on the emtion packed featured poem. Keep writing. Sara
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September 7, 2009 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations, Steven Godfrey on having your poem featured this week. It is always good to read brilliant, though sad, poetry like this. Keep those words flowing. Feel better. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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August 20, 2009 at 4:36 PM
I really love the line I pull gravel from my soul!! Keep writing.
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August 19, 2009 at 6:59 AM
nicely put emotions,
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