What a Wonderful Dream of P.S 19

This poem was written by my brother - in - law Bruce Saks who is a high ranking member of
the New York City police force.


T'was the day before Christmas and all through the School
Not a child was talking ...not a break of a rule
The halls were all empty ....the classes all filled 
The children all learning...the teachers all thrilled
The books were all open ....the pencils so worn
From the writing of children ...oh my what great form
A voice on the speaker shouted out with such glee
What a great job you're doing....you teachers you see
Now the bells all had sounded and the tots all on line
Not a peep in the ranks ...not a voice ...not a whine
For lunch was on hand and the day was half done
Another few hour of this great joyous fun
We started our reading ...we all read our books
We read...and we read...not a peep..not a look 
I looked at the wall and the clock had said three       
And the bell it was ring for the children and me 
Goodbye all you sweet ones...whose such fun and such joys
Can't wait till tomorrow for you girls and you boys
Then all of a sudden my eyes opened wide 
To the ring of my clock that just shook me inside 
Yes it was all just a dream with my full day ahead
Of pencils and reading and kids to be fed
Oh what a thought ...if it could happen that way 
A beautiful vision makes a beautiful day 
So I.m back in my room and a voice soon speaks out 
F from that box on the wall...with a shriek and a shout
A meeting at lunchtime that you all must attend
No excuses accepted...you must stay ..till  the end
No I 'm not dreaming ...but this I will say 
That tonight in my bed at the end of my day 
I will lay down and dream of a wonderful thought 
Of all the young children that all I have taught
Then all of a sudden my eyes opened wide 
To the ring of my clock that shook me inside 
Yes again I have dreamt and again I will say 
Can't wait for my bed at the end of the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/6/2010 9:34:00 AM
A wonderful poem that Bruce wrote....and since my aunt is a teacher of special needs children I know that it can be very stressful and she feels at times like she isn't doing a good enough job. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your kind comments. All is much appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:31:00 PM
good one
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:58:00 AM
Hi and thanks for your comment on my poem. I knew right where this one was going! Bruce did a good job with it! andrea
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:23:00 AM
Awesome write! I loved this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:14:00 PM
Soup mail!
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Date: 12/17/2009 10:07:00 AM
Dear Matthew, thanks for the heads up on Triond.com. I hope you have had some success with the site and I'll visit it too. You have a lot of talent, my friend, and I'm so glad we met on Poetry Soup. Much love and holiday cheer go out to you! Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:05:00 AM
Awesome! Thanks for sharing Bruce's poem with us. God bless teachers for most of them genuinely care and give so willingly of themselves! They will get their reward! May God also bless Bruce and his family! Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Peace and love to you, Audrey
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Date: 12/13/2009 3:28:00 PM
Matthew, please tell Mr. Saks that he well conveys the angst teachers feel and their desires that children will enjoy learning. As a former teacher, I have had this type of dream myself. We can only make it a reality by making learning fun! Bringing humor and gaiety into the classroom require a special touch. Your brother has hit the proverbial nail on the head!! Awesome work! Merry Christmas to both of you. Love, Carolyn
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