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What A trip

For my very special birthday,
                                         
my girlfriend and I went on a trip on the ocean not on the bay.
           
Before going to bed,
                                                     
I washed some things out~then off to see the sun of red.
My things are still wet the next morning,
                       
this must be a huge warning.
                                         
It turns out,
they are my things she said with a shout.
                       
We both had it all,
                                                       
we laughed until we had to crawl.
                                 
Both with bright teal underwear,
                                   
that was more then we could bare.
Date Written 1/3/2022
3 Place
    
Funny Memories  Contest Judged:1/28/2022
Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg
Note: She has since passed away. At her funeral,
I told this story along with a couple more.
Everyone laughed. Sad to lose a great friend........

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Date: 1/30/2022 6:06:00 AM
Paula, thanks for sharing this entertaining, amusing story! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/31/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my fun/amusing~~story/write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week.......................
Date: 1/29/2022 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations too my dear friend, Paula. I'm so delighted to read your poem this morning giving me smiles and laughs. Awesome poem to treasure the happy mem'ries with a great friend. Sorry for lossing her, dear. I'm sure she's smiling to see you keeping her in your heart especially through this wonderful poem. God bless you always.Have a great weekend.Hugs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/31/2022 8:49:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad my write is giving you smiles/laughs. I love to make people happy. Have a great/blessed~~day/week.......................
Date: 1/7/2022 1:47:00 AM
A loving tribute to the memory of a dear friend...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/7/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. She was one in a million. I miss her and all the fun we had. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/6/2022 7:47:00 PM
Good friends must be treasured for they are few and far between - i have been to several schools in my life but never have I made as many as I have here on soup, and all because we all have the same interest at heart . Paula thank you for you continual wonderful support during 2021 and hope we get to know each other a whole lot more this year. Happy 2022 to you dear PAULA . Hugs ad Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 1/5/2022 7:57:00 AM
Like you, I lost my best friend too.... She and I laughed so much and did zany things... Oh, Paula! There will tel another like her.. I can relate to your loss! Pangie,
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2022 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this trip write. Some friends are one in a million and that was her. We would laugh until we cried tears of joy. Sorry you also lost your best friend. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/4/2022 8:19:00 PM
Hi Paula, this poem has generated mixed feelings in me.... sadness and humor ! Sad you lost a good friend . Glad that you have a reason to smile thinking of her.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. You are so right. Sad a great neighbor/friend is gone. Yet we had a ton of fun/laughs. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/4/2022 9:44:00 AM
Sounds like a great friendship; glad you had that time together. Well penned.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2022 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this trip one. She was a great neighbor/friend. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/4/2022 3:51:00 AM
A memory that with stay with you forever Paula! What a great way to keep her in your heart!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2022 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. I have some great memories. Yes, in my heart forever. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/3/2022 5:32:00 PM
Thanks for the smiles and the laughs your poem brought, Paula. Very uplifting, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad I gave you smiles/laughs with this write. I love to give smiles/laughs out. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/3/2022 1:41:00 PM
Happy memories you made Paula. I'm sorry for your loss. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun travel write. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................
Date: 1/3/2022 12:57:00 PM
A great poem as a tribute to your past friend Paula, Sorry for her loss. My very best wishes to you and congratulations on selecting your poem in the anthology.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2022 12:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Also thanks for your best wishes/congratulations on selecting my poem in the anthology. Glad you like this fun travel tribute to my friend. Have a blessed day and New Year.....................