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A bad tempered brat from Nantucket Drops her phone, but claims that a thief took it The girl will not calm down Her swearing makes dad frown She raises her fist shouting ‘suck it’! The meaning couldn’t be misconstrued Her father says just quit your foul mood She says she trashed her phone - dropped it on her way home She’s grounded for lies and being rude 5/20/18

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2018 3:50:00 PM

:) , love it

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/22/2018 12:46:00 PM

Good, I'm glad...

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/21/2018 5:15:00 PM

sounds like a lot of girls nowadays

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2018 2:31:00 AM

And lads too Cas, they are glued to their devices and need to have the latest at whatever cost:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2018 2:14:00 PM

- Some can not live without the mobile phone - And some must have the latest in the market ... it applies to both children and adults - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2018 2:17:00 PM

oh so true Anne Lise:-) My phone is prehistoric and just is for text and calls yet now they have re introduced the same nokia model so my basic phone is now 'trendy' lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/21/2018 9:05:00 AM

Sounds like something from a bygone era - MINE!! loved it xxoo we need more discipline!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2018 11:38:00 AM

lol thanks Mike, you are all grown up now and I am sure you are a great role model to the younger generation:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/21/2018 6:19:00 AM

Great one Jan...next they'll be wearing phone implants...like to see them drop that lol...love and light...^WW^

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2018 11:37:00 AM

ha ha ha that would be hilarious... and some are so glued to their mobiles they need to have the phones surgically removed lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/20/2018 10:12:00 PM

Oh, I wish this was true. Tell me it's true. So many children today do not have any consequences, and they are begging for an adult in their life who will set some rules.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2018 1:29:00 AM

Oh if only it was true ...We both have worked in education Caren and see the problems caused by student's not having guidelines to follow and good parental role models:-( I did see one student deliberately drop their phone in the street (not in school time) and it just co -incided with the release of a new i phone:-( no idea if parents caught on!!) hugs jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 5/20/2018 5:35:00 PM

Nice!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2018 1:24:00 AM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2018 4:58:00 PM

NIce one about those kinds of people who simply can't "fess up!! How are you doing today? I only need to do comments and then I can work on poems since I got all my other duties done (except for dinner yet to come!)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2018 5:14:00 PM

Apart from my broken finger I am doing fine just soooooo frustrating not to be able to do what you take for granted:-( have a lovely day:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/20/2018 2:22:00 PM

Love rhyming "misconstrued" with "foul mood" - so moody like most teenagers!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2018 2:31:00 PM

I woke up with the first stanza in my head and just elaborated with the second one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/20/2018 2:02:00 PM

And rightly so Jan, some kids today have no respect. In addition no Facebook for a month. You highlighted the spoilt brat syndrome well lol. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2018 2:06:00 PM

I recall when i worked in school one kid would deliberately drop their phone and amazingly it always co incidence with the launch of the latest i-phone:-( hugs Jan xx