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What a Predicament

 An ugly, wriggly worm got into his trousers, wiggling and crawling
Reached a place he couldn't scratch, making him wobbling and howling


 Jan.5. 2022
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Gershon Wolf Date: 2/6/2022 8:31:00 PM A worm in trousers, wobbling and howling. You certainly had your 'imagination cap' on when you wrote this one, Valsa! Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 2/6/2022 10:16:00 AM Wriggly worms are one thing, but fire ants are a real pain! Aloha! Login to Reply

Hilo Poet Date: 2/6/2022 8:33:00 AM Oh my, Valsa, he's in a bit of an uncomfortable predicament, to say the least, anyhow, 'tis a nice rendered couplet, and here's to hoping your best my friend, Aloha! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 2/6/2022 8:22:00 AM Valsa, your couplet is hilarious. I don't recall ever being a victim of aggressive nematodes. Indeed, they would be gone in no time. Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 2/6/2022 8:17:00 AM Hahaha. Reminds me of a hairy worm in my native town which is very itchy. Once it gets even into your clothes you will itch a lot and it will spread to all the areas you scratch. Humorous couplet. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/6/2022 4:22:00 AM Ha, Ha, Ha Ha hysterically funny, I can visualize the predicament! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 2/6/2022 7:58:00 AM Hi Jennifer, I am very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot ! Stay blessed dear !

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/6/2022 1:48:00 AM Can't say I ever suffered from invasive worms. The would be dead quickly enough. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 2/6/2022 7:57:00 AM But as long as it keeps wriggling on the skin, it tickles and is so annoying.

Anil Deo Date: 2/5/2022 9:27:00 PM Bilhartzia? That used to be a problem in South Africa. ThanX Sis, for a laugh & a caution. Shalom shalom in Lord Jesus, who protects us from every danger ( psalms, eg. 37) Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 2/6/2022 7:54:00 AM I don't think that Bilhartzia is here. I am talking about a kind of furry worm - the very contact of which will cause severe itching. Glad you had a laugh . Thanks a lot brother... Love and peace

Sally Eslinger Date: 2/5/2022 9:18:00 PM Hello, Valsa! Nice to meet you! This is a delightful, deceivingly simple (not at all!) rhyming poem. It is very visual to me. I pictured a 4-year-old in baggy trousers wriggle dancing trying to deal with that tormented worm! Thank you. Really enjoyed this. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 2/6/2022 7:50:00 AM I too am happy to meet you dear poet friend.Thanks a lot for your kind comment and you visualizing such a situation. I wrote this just to give everyone a light moment !