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What a Liar

Eve Rules
  Adam Drools  {Joseph Spence }

My garden
  Beg Your Pardon

Succalant Mango
     Let's Tango

Vineyard
    Man Work Hard

More grapes
   Apples Ate

Bare Essance
   My preference

Why Oh Why
  Did Adam Try


Cause Snaked Lied
   And Humanity Died

adventureeducationfantasyforgivenessfunnylight verse

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Brian Strand

May 31, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Like the opening footle Katherine.Rgds Brian

Danny Nunn

May 31, 2010 at 8:18 AM

Funny but so true, great write...thanks on Bomb..kind of how it is on the Mexican border now..Danny

Joseph Spence Sr

May 31, 2010 at 5:49 AM

Okay sis. Slammed me! I just love poetry as a means of creative expression. This would make a great song too. I like your awesome lyrics. Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 30, 2010 at 6:05 PM

I read this aloud twice, with my writing table as a drum. A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck

Michael Jordan

May 30, 2010 at 5:08 PM

Katherine, I hope you and Jenny are doing well. i imagine she is quite the young lady now. These Adam and Eve poems crack me up. I reckon God knew they would both eat the apple when he placed the tree. Why else would he have put it there? I wonder what type of apple it was? I've also always wondered why people didn't turn on the apple like they did the snake. Wouldn't the big juicy red apple be as much a culprit as the rest of the players is this game! YF4L, God Bless, mj

Audrey Haick

May 30, 2010 at 4:38 PM

Good luck in the contest, Katherine...enjoyed reading this winner! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

May 30, 2010 at 4:29 PM

Wow...ended your poem with quite a punch!! Well done, Katherine!!! oh yes...ps..Happy Birthday!! :) Love, Carrie

Skat A

May 30, 2010 at 1:54 PM

HOW COOL AND CREATIVE... LOVED IT

Carolyn Devonshire

May 30, 2010 at 1:09 PM

VERY CLEVER, Katherine! You said it all in a sparsely worded rhyme that hits a home run. And you grab the readers attention so well with the first two witty lines, then carry through to the end. Love, Carolyn