Brian Strand, 1468 Poetry Contest
that heart pounding moment risqué of midnight negligé his hunger satisfied the quake of furniture pearls glistening on floor candle flame flickering, flickering language of love making tongues swoon surreality of being one coalescent couple burning conclusive kiss, sigh, satisfied the dewy, unresistant words that come with completion simply expounding love that remembers that forgets that forges the future
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