Whale of a Time - Dream Contest

I was there 
There .... floating on a small fluffy cloud
Hovering over the sea
Watching the seals at play.
I could see on the horizon
The sighting of a whale
I knew the seals would be vulnerable
I tried to call out,
To wave my hands,
To warn them.

They ignored me,
The whale swam closer
Could see the mouth open.
Ready.....ready ...to swallow a few
My heart pounded
What could I do.
I jumped 
Jumped from my fluffy cloud
Landed on the whales back

Not sure who was most surprised
The whale or me
Then he began to dive under the waves
Tossing me in the air
The seals seeing the commotion
Rapidly swam away

The last time he tossed me in the air
I landed on a small island
Badly battered and bruised
No food no water my fate was sealed
I lay down closed my eyes to sleep

I was awoken by a lollopy dog
Head butting me to wake up
My bed clothes were in a mess
Torn to shreds, I was sweating
Perspiration soaking through my nightclothes
Was such a real dream
What ....
who ...
was I trying to warn?
Will I ever know?


Penned 20 April 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/30/2015 6:39:00 PM
SEREN. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Skat....Seren
Date: 4/28/2015 10:41:00 PM
An amazing write Seren, A Fav!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Armand.......Seren
Date: 4/28/2015 2:26:00 PM
Seren :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/28/2015 9:18:00 PM
Thank you...Seren
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