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Whacky in a Whacked Outland

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Flim flam artists con like hackers From the digital underworld Scammers. Modern Thieves Taking advantage of not just Little ol’ ladies, but Me! And the vulnerable gullible glue That holds our species together Shame on you! I cast you, you know who you are who entertain time with waste With the spoils of others Internet Idiocracy is not a democracy You, gangsters of greed With the shameless need To make others bleed For your sins I'm a $1,000 in the hole, you poor soul I cast you Into a special spot, the Deepest Hole In Hell That only one spell can break You free Give up your riches Give up your chaotic chores Give in to Jesus He is the only Door For any redemption You fools! Not tHe ENd Am I whacked out, or what? To actually believe And actually, have high hopes That someday human beings Will just FOCUS their attention And unite under one Earth flag To hold up high with human half-baked intentions Even with a modicum of enlightenment Accomplish the Unimaginable end Peace it all together and Free the human spirit not by the Bomb But by giving, each person their voice Acknowledge the uniqueness that spawns genius Education is everything. Never stop learning ... Be allowed to express, even darklike King’s Freed to believe, to hope, even grope or cling For a better future for our grandchildren Will it be a legacy of Liberty, or loss? Am I a whacked out global goliath? Or what!? Child of God Damn right I stand up With my brothers and sisters Against oppression, tyranny And fatalistic foes Hand in hand, with the sWORD of Christ His piece ploys me to reveal Something whacky So, come join me at the outer edges of the Greens Where dandelions and roses grow Side by side, row by row Stitching the seams of the Universe together Come gets some whacky Taffy while it lasts Off to the whacked-out Lands for Peace Keep on sippin’ some poetrysoup Where my whacky wisdom Is the latest scoop If not mine, then yours, you nincompoop Let's get whacky in a Whackyland! Let’s gets soupy in a poetrysoup land! Let’s be friendly in a Friendland! So, Keep on Sharing! even if it’s a little whacky ...

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Date: 3/1/2025 9:54:00 AM
One world. Whacky? Then whacky it is!
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