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A note he left on my pillow when I was on a trip. I came home to this :) No photo description available.

*Dedicated to my hubby. The reason I am who I am today and the reason I have been able to get through the last 2 years. Blessings, my love.*
debilitated was I when we met, then you gave me a love I shan’t forget- when rain cascades I shall show you kindness, (ha) you shall give common sense when mindless; I smirk, you sit; I etch your silhouette for when I became yours, love I knew none, then I felt your passion; hot as the sun- youth brought you filled with much adoration, for, love, I’m grateful for your creation; and the best part is…we’ve only begun 10 syllables in each line August 25, 2019

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Date: 8/26/2019 6:07:00 PM
this is wonderful. Both the poem and the fact for what you have with him. I love the hint of a reference to a Carpenter's song. I just used one myself recently!
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:02:00 PM
yes....LOVE the Carpenters. I didn't even realize I referenced that song! Too funny. I missed the "just" I guess lol thank you sweet Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 8/26/2019 11:28:00 AM
I'm so glad you found a mate who makes your life better, Lu Loo. Friends always write to me complaining of their spouses. It's so refreshing to know you are grateful for yours! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:01:00 PM
I know! my bestie complains all day everyday. I feel bad for her but I wish she would just talk to him already!!! lol thank you lovely Carolyn :)-luloo
Date: 8/26/2019 6:59:00 AM
such a beautiful poem for your love... you are not only gifted, but blessed as well! hugs :)
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:00:00 PM
aww thank you sweet Sandy :)-luloo
Date: 8/26/2019 5:47:00 AM
A lovely dedication...
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:00:00 PM
many thanks dear Arturo :)-luloo
Date: 8/25/2019 3:48:00 PM
Beautiful feeling of young love, LU!
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Date: 8/29/2019 1:00:00 PM
yes, thank you dear Ralph :)-luloo